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Vely's WSC writing prep


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 The junk food should be banned from school

First of all I would like to define the motion. Junk food is food that has low nutritional value,typically produced in the form of packaged snacks needing little or no preparation. Based on www.fatfreekitchen.com, the example of junk food are fast food like Pizza,Burger,Fried chicken,etc. And there also snacks&desserts like hot-dogs,tacos,etc. Junk food is unhealthy food but there are many people that eat junk food and they look alright.
      I agree with this motion because there are negative effects when student eat it.
      Junk food is dangerous for our health. Because based on en.m.wikipedia.org, When junk food is consumed very often,the excess fat,carbohydrates,and processed sugar found in junk food contributes to an increased risk of obesity,cardiovascular disease,diabetes,and many other chronic health conditions. And fast food also including junk food. And fast food also dangerous for us because food is fuel for your body.. Fast food isnt necessarily bad,but in many cases its highly processed and contains large amounts of carbohydrates,added sugar,unhealthy fats,and salt (sodium). Theese foods are often high in calories yet offer little or no nutritional value. Based on www.jamesclear.com, many people that has to eat junk food is go to hospital because they are have illness such as heart disease,diabetes,etc.
     If supposing junk food be sell on the school/canteen,its also waste students money. Because they will be loss to buy the junk food. On indonesian moneu,Rupiah. Junk food price is 20 thousand. Find money only 20 thousand its no easy for every one. Based on www.healtyjunkfood.com,Junk food is helpful not have even more detrimental. Because junk food is unhealthy food. We can buy another food that more good and make our body healty. There are fruit,vegetable,etc. It will be more useful and it more healthy and contain many protein,vitamin,etc
     Junk food make children stop concitrate from their lesson at school. Children need to concitrate when they study. If not concitrate,lesson that teachers teach will not go on their brain. Based on www.Healthyeating.sfgate.com,According to Women's and Children's health network,diet has a significant effect on children's study habits. Junk food and food with high sugar content deplete energy. Levels and the ability to concentrate for extented periods of tome. Energy and focus are especially crucial for school-age children. Children set the foundation for life-long habits in their youth,making junk food particularly development. Physical activity is also essential for children of all ages,and regularly eating junk food dues not provide the necessary nutrients children need for sufficient energy to engage in physical activity is harmful to physical and mental well being and may also exclude a child from critical social development.
     In conclusion,Junk food should be banne from school because Junk food is dangerous for our health,we will be loss if we buy junk food and it will stop concitrate students when study.And I believe that this motion should stand.

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Khansa's WSC writing prep


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That Alice has no obligation to obey the laws of Wonderland
First of all, Alice is a person that have a high imagination, until she can create her own imagination world. In that world, she have a lot of friends that are a kind, smart, and good friend. Laws is a kind of something that suppose to be obey'd by the stranger, it's a kind of rules or something. Like what I said it early, Wonderland is a world that is come from Alice's imagination, it's a awesome world, because her friend in Wonderland is have feeling too, like a real world.
  On to my argument. Like what I said it above, Wonderland is only Alice's imagination, so, why she have to obey the laws of her world imagination it self? If that is her world imagination, she can do what she want to do right? And second, actually, Wonderland  is a place for free, we can do anything what we want to do. From the name, it's 'Wonder', it means everything that we woder it for a long, long time, and we wonder that everything is free for us right?
The first reason why Alice didn't have to obey of all laws in Wonderland is because Woderland is naturally Alice's imagination, what her want to do is in there, all friends that she crave is in there, that's what she wonder it for a long, long time. She imagine that she being hero for the Wonderland, she talk to a queen in Wonderland, she can do a lot of things out there! And how she obey the rules if her imagination it self? But she didn't have any laws in her imagination?
My second reason is, because in fact, Wonderland is a place for free, it didn't have any laws,  so what Alice have to obey for?? "Wonder" symbolize that we can do everythings in there, we can be free, we can do what we want to do, and many else. Even if there is some laws in the Wonderland, Alice didn't have to obey a lot of it so much right? So what will happend if Alice didn't obey the laws? Be putted into prison? Be killed? What?! In her imagination? Are you kidding me?

  In conclusion I agree with the motion because Wonderland is Alice's imagination and because Wonderland actually means "free".

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Indana's WSC writing prep


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THAT MODERN WORLD NEED MYTHS MORE THAN ANCIENT WORLD


Modern World is advances in all of human activity-politics, industry, society, economics,              transport, communication,                                 mechanization, science,m edicine,                    technology, and culture, and ancient world is the old world.
          I believe this motion should fall because sometimes myths are conspiracy,and conspiracy is a group of people who want to make a plan that want to fall other people.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
           So my 1st argument is because myths more than ancient world is the biggest myths. Because in ancient world done have about 79% of myths, so it's become many myths that the modern world have when need myths more than ancient world. Based on https.//www.quora.com That myths cannot convence generation.Except the enomically backward,Hance Bhagvad Geeta is the only answer to the whole human race. So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
             And my 2nd argument is that because world consist of society,so the society will objection to get many myths. So when there is people that said "Huh,this world get many myths I hate it,I want to die".How we can stop it??We can stop it with reduce myths in midern world.Based on www.listverse.com The example of ancient world myths is Vampires.If you hate the last coulpe of years of horman-driven angst-inspired vampire media,try living in Medieval Eroupe.Back then,belief in vampire was so prevalent that barely a single country didn't consider them terrifying fact of life.When crops failed or a baby was born with a slight deformithy,you'd better believe vampires got the blame.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
               So in conclusion:modern world not need myths more than ancient world,because the society will objection and myths in the world is increase,because as you know 79% is ancient world so 21% again the world already covered by the myths.



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Naura's wsc writing prep


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That junk food sshould be baned from school
Today I will write under the motion that junk food should be baned from school and now iwant to define the motion junk food is a food that is calorie dense  and nutrient poor so i agree with this motion.
My first argument is it can cause a bad future becasue it have bad desease because we cant learn well so it can cause a bad future
My second argument is that it is wasting money because it is not healthy so it waste money and it can cause you lots of desease that is dangerous
My third argument is thatjunk food can cause deaths slowly when your getting older and older because your getting attached to it so you always eat it

So the concluson is i belive that this motion should stand because it is dangerous and it can caus desease that make a bad future for us

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Nisrina's WSC writing prep


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That junk food should be banned from school
First, I want to explain the definition of junk food. Based on merriam-webster.com junk food is a food that has high calories and low nutritional content. And i agree with this motion so i believe that this statement should stand. Based on jamesclear.com thst junk food had a poor nutrition that causes heart problems, high blood pressure, and a host of other health ailments. Besides that eating junk food causes high level of Diabetes. So i agree with this motion because eating junk food are suppose to be banned from school and eating junk food causes a really bad disease.
My first agrument or reason, I agree with this motion because students can’t learn well because of eating junk food at school that causes a disease. Based on articles.mercda.com that 71 % that students in elementary school got a bad disease and thats made students can’t learn well at school. So i believe that junk food should be banned forever from school because it causes a really bad disease. No once want any disease on them, right!. So we must avoid any junk food to make our body stay healthy and we can continue studying in our school by no disorders of the disease.
My second agrument or reason, I agree because junk food contains many sugar and high calories that causes obesitys. Now many students from many school got an obesity, and the obesitys are makes students getting worst. For the axample their teacher told them to run quickly but they have an obesitys they run very slow that makes they lose from the other students. So eating junk food cause bad impact like obesitys, diabetes, and other. I believe by banning the junk food from school is a good idea.
My last agrument or reason is I agree with this motion because junk food are expensive for children. I believe that students can keep their money in their bank and they can keep that money for buying anything. If they just buying a expensive junk food its make their money decreasing. So i believe that students better buy a healthy food than buying junk food for them. So in  the conclusion i agree with this motion because junk food in the school just giving student bad impact, like whatever i said before in the paragraph.  

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