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That junkfood should be banned

Junk food. Do you know junkfood? Junkfood is a food that contains high levels of calories, fats, and sugar with little amount of fiber,protein,vitamin,and minerals. Some of the junkfood in the packaging even had no vitamins ,minerals,fiber, or proteins! Some junkfood are expensive. I agree with this motion because  there are no advantages that junk food can do for us. Well at least there is something that junkfood can do to our body. What aca? Tell us! Ok then. Here it is : making us FAT! And making us fat is not an advantage.

My first reason is junkfood makes us suffer from so many disease : high cholesterol, high blood preassure , obesity and it can cause our heart to work harder , leading us to..... heart disease and stroke. Oh noo! It’s all bad disease! Shouldn’t we need to keep our body healthy things to the organ of our body. I found something new about junk food there is a junk food that don’t just make us fat. But.... it could also shrink your brain! Because junk food making us fat, it can make us overweight. And overweight can change the way we think, affecting our judgement and making us crave even more high calorie fodder. Oh dear. That is terrible. That means it will make us gain more weight! It is not a good thing if students in the school are all obesity. And what if the teachers got stroke? Oh noo


Ok let’s go to my second reason, shall we? Ok. The school is the place where we are preparing our future not destroying it by eating junk food! If i was in a school that supports junk food and provide junk food i will say it’s a waste of money! I believe if we eat junk food at school, it is a future destroyer. So we shall not provide junk food at school because it is contary to the purpose of the school. The school should be giving us good future but by providing junk food, it will destroy our future.

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