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Vely's WSC writing prep


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 The junk food should be banned from school

First of all I would like to define the motion. Junk food is food that has low nutritional value,typically produced in the form of packaged snacks needing little or no preparation. Based on www.fatfreekitchen.com, the example of junk food are fast food like Pizza,Burger,Fried chicken,etc. And there also snacks&desserts like hot-dogs,tacos,etc. Junk food is unhealthy food but there are many people that eat junk food and they look alright.
      I agree with this motion because there are negative effects when student eat it.
      Junk food is dangerous for our health. Because based on en.m.wikipedia.org, When junk food is consumed very often,the excess fat,carbohydrates,and processed sugar found in junk food contributes to an increased risk of obesity,cardiovascular disease,diabetes,and many other chronic health conditions. And fast food also including junk food. And fast food also dangerous for us because food is fuel for your body.. Fast food isnt necessarily bad,but in many cases its highly processed and contains large amounts of carbohydrates,added sugar,unhealthy fats,and salt (sodium). Theese foods are often high in calories yet offer little or no nutritional value. Based on www.jamesclear.com, many people that has to eat junk food is go to hospital because they are have illness such as heart disease,diabetes,etc.
     If supposing junk food be sell on the school/canteen,its also waste students money. Because they will be loss to buy the junk food. On indonesian moneu,Rupiah. Junk food price is 20 thousand. Find money only 20 thousand its no easy for every one. Based on www.healtyjunkfood.com,Junk food is helpful not have even more detrimental. Because junk food is unhealthy food. We can buy another food that more good and make our body healty. There are fruit,vegetable,etc. It will be more useful and it more healthy and contain many protein,vitamin,etc
     Junk food make children stop concitrate from their lesson at school. Children need to concitrate when they study. If not concitrate,lesson that teachers teach will not go on their brain. Based on www.Healthyeating.sfgate.com,According to Women's and Children's health network,diet has a significant effect on children's study habits. Junk food and food with high sugar content deplete energy. Levels and the ability to concentrate for extented periods of tome. Energy and focus are especially crucial for school-age children. Children set the foundation for life-long habits in their youth,making junk food particularly development. Physical activity is also essential for children of all ages,and regularly eating junk food dues not provide the necessary nutrients children need for sufficient energy to engage in physical activity is harmful to physical and mental well being and may also exclude a child from critical social development.
     In conclusion,Junk food should be banne from school because Junk food is dangerous for our health,we will be loss if we buy junk food and it will stop concitrate students when study.And I believe that this motion should stand.

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Khansa's WSC writing prep


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That Alice has no obligation to obey the laws of Wonderland
First of all, Alice is a person that have a high imagination, until she can create her own imagination world. In that world, she have a lot of friends that are a kind, smart, and good friend. Laws is a kind of something that suppose to be obey'd by the stranger, it's a kind of rules or something. Like what I said it early, Wonderland is a world that is come from Alice's imagination, it's a awesome world, because her friend in Wonderland is have feeling too, like a real world.
  On to my argument. Like what I said it above, Wonderland is only Alice's imagination, so, why she have to obey the laws of her world imagination it self? If that is her world imagination, she can do what she want to do right? And second, actually, Wonderland  is a place for free, we can do anything what we want to do. From the name, it's 'Wonder', it means everything that we woder it for a long, long time, and we wonder that everything is free for us right?
The first reason why Alice didn't have to obey of all laws in Wonderland is because Woderland is naturally Alice's imagination, what her want to do is in there, all friends that she crave is in there, that's what she wonder it for a long, long time. She imagine that she being hero for the Wonderland, she talk to a queen in Wonderland, she can do a lot of things out there! And how she obey the rules if her imagination it self? But she didn't have any laws in her imagination?
My second reason is, because in fact, Wonderland is a place for free, it didn't have any laws,  so what Alice have to obey for?? "Wonder" symbolize that we can do everythings in there, we can be free, we can do what we want to do, and many else. Even if there is some laws in the Wonderland, Alice didn't have to obey a lot of it so much right? So what will happend if Alice didn't obey the laws? Be putted into prison? Be killed? What?! In her imagination? Are you kidding me?

  In conclusion I agree with the motion because Wonderland is Alice's imagination and because Wonderland actually means "free".

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Indana's WSC writing prep


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THAT MODERN WORLD NEED MYTHS MORE THAN ANCIENT WORLD


Modern World is advances in all of human activity-politics, industry, society, economics,              transport, communication,                                 mechanization, science,m edicine,                    technology, and culture, and ancient world is the old world.
          I believe this motion should fall because sometimes myths are conspiracy,and conspiracy is a group of people who want to make a plan that want to fall other people.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
           So my 1st argument is because myths more than ancient world is the biggest myths. Because in ancient world done have about 79% of myths, so it's become many myths that the modern world have when need myths more than ancient world. Based on https.//www.quora.com That myths cannot convence generation.Except the enomically backward,Hance Bhagvad Geeta is the only answer to the whole human race. So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
             And my 2nd argument is that because world consist of society,so the society will objection to get many myths. So when there is people that said "Huh,this world get many myths I hate it,I want to die".How we can stop it??We can stop it with reduce myths in midern world.Based on www.listverse.com The example of ancient world myths is Vampires.If you hate the last coulpe of years of horman-driven angst-inspired vampire media,try living in Medieval Eroupe.Back then,belief in vampire was so prevalent that barely a single country didn't consider them terrifying fact of life.When crops failed or a baby was born with a slight deformithy,you'd better believe vampires got the blame.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
               So in conclusion:modern world not need myths more than ancient world,because the society will objection and myths in the world is increase,because as you know 79% is ancient world so 21% again the world already covered by the myths.



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Naura's wsc writing prep


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That junk food sshould be baned from school
Today I will write under the motion that junk food should be baned from school and now iwant to define the motion junk food is a food that is calorie dense  and nutrient poor so i agree with this motion.
My first argument is it can cause a bad future becasue it have bad desease because we cant learn well so it can cause a bad future
My second argument is that it is wasting money because it is not healthy so it waste money and it can cause you lots of desease that is dangerous
My third argument is thatjunk food can cause deaths slowly when your getting older and older because your getting attached to it so you always eat it

So the concluson is i belive that this motion should stand because it is dangerous and it can caus desease that make a bad future for us

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Nisrina's WSC writing prep


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That junk food should be banned from school
First, I want to explain the definition of junk food. Based on merriam-webster.com junk food is a food that has high calories and low nutritional content. And i agree with this motion so i believe that this statement should stand. Based on jamesclear.com thst junk food had a poor nutrition that causes heart problems, high blood pressure, and a host of other health ailments. Besides that eating junk food causes high level of Diabetes. So i agree with this motion because eating junk food are suppose to be banned from school and eating junk food causes a really bad disease.
My first agrument or reason, I agree with this motion because students can’t learn well because of eating junk food at school that causes a disease. Based on articles.mercda.com that 71 % that students in elementary school got a bad disease and thats made students can’t learn well at school. So i believe that junk food should be banned forever from school because it causes a really bad disease. No once want any disease on them, right!. So we must avoid any junk food to make our body stay healthy and we can continue studying in our school by no disorders of the disease.
My second agrument or reason, I agree because junk food contains many sugar and high calories that causes obesitys. Now many students from many school got an obesity, and the obesitys are makes students getting worst. For the axample their teacher told them to run quickly but they have an obesitys they run very slow that makes they lose from the other students. So eating junk food cause bad impact like obesitys, diabetes, and other. I believe by banning the junk food from school is a good idea.
My last agrument or reason is I agree with this motion because junk food are expensive for children. I believe that students can keep their money in their bank and they can keep that money for buying anything. If they just buying a expensive junk food its make their money decreasing. So i believe that students better buy a healthy food than buying junk food for them. So in  the conclusion i agree with this motion because junk food in the school just giving student bad impact, like whatever i said before in the paragraph.  

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Maura's wsc writing prep


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That junkfood should be banned in school

Good morning, my name is Maura Athallya Moza. Today  our motion is that junkfood should be banned in school.
First of all I want to tell the definition of junkfood. Junk  food is food that is not good for your healthy because it contains high amount of fat or sugar. I agree with this motion because first, it cause fat example:hot dogs,burger and sandwiches have slabs of cheese layerd on the feeling.These  also have mayonise spread on it which also contains excessive fat. The oil used for the fries is fattening.
Added sugar; The quantities of added sugar in the food that we usually consume.not to ignore that added food in the sodas and colas.
And also diabetes.the sugar in the colas,sodas and beverage contain high amount of sugar.the absence of other nutrients in junk food to bring the best out of sugar causes adverse effects on your child.
The topping has sauce and blobs of mayonise. Salt is present in ample quantity in all the sauce used on these toppings and filling of burgers,french fries and salads. so i believe this motion should stand.


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Aca's WSC writing prep


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That junkfood should be banned

Junk food. Do you know junkfood? Junkfood is a food that contains high levels of calories, fats, and sugar with little amount of fiber,protein,vitamin,and minerals. Some of the junkfood in the packaging even had no vitamins ,minerals,fiber, or proteins! Some junkfood are expensive. I agree with this motion because  there are no advantages that junk food can do for us. Well at least there is something that junkfood can do to our body. What aca? Tell us! Ok then. Here it is : making us FAT! And making us fat is not an advantage.

My first reason is junkfood makes us suffer from so many disease : high cholesterol, high blood preassure , obesity and it can cause our heart to work harder , leading us to..... heart disease and stroke. Oh noo! It’s all bad disease! Shouldn’t we need to keep our body healthy things to the organ of our body. I found something new about junk food there is a junk food that don’t just make us fat. But.... it could also shrink your brain! Because junk food making us fat, it can make us overweight. And overweight can change the way we think, affecting our judgement and making us crave even more high calorie fodder. Oh dear. That is terrible. That means it will make us gain more weight! It is not a good thing if students in the school are all obesity. And what if the teachers got stroke? Oh noo


Ok let’s go to my second reason, shall we? Ok. The school is the place where we are preparing our future not destroying it by eating junk food! If i was in a school that supports junk food and provide junk food i will say it’s a waste of money! I believe if we eat junk food at school, it is a future destroyer. So we shall not provide junk food at school because it is contary to the purpose of the school. The school should be giving us good future but by providing junk food, it will destroy our future.

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Fira's WSC writing prep


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That junk food should be banned from school

Hi my name is Fira,our motion today is that junk food should be banned from school.Junk food is a pejorative term for cheap food containing high levels of calories from sugar or fat with little fiber,protein,vitamins or minerals.School is a place where children study.
            I agree with this motion because junk food is bad for children health.Junk food contains many oil,many sugar and many fat.They can be sick and overweight by eating too much junk food.based on www.debate.org 32% of youth are overweight and nearly 74% are unfit because they eat many junk food.Kids really hard to tell is the food good or bad because kids really like junk food and junk food taste delicious than the other food so they will be addicted to junk food.
            My first poin is if school still provide junk food many people will think that the teacher is not care to the students health.The teacher dont care for their students future because they let the students eat many junk food.And ofcourse all teacher know that junk food is bad so why they let their students eat junk food?We know that junk food is easy to make and fast to make but do teacher more care about the time then more care about their students health?All teacher want their students not sick right.
            My second point is if their parents let their children eat many junk food in school ,the parents not care for their children right.Parents can make creative break time snacks for their children. The example is:Parents can make healthy sandwich with face decorations better then burgers in the canteen. Children will be more healthy.
            My third point is their friends still disturb their friends to eat junk food so the students will still eat junk food and they will be sick again.Their parents will be mad at them but that only because their friends.
            My conclusion is junk food should be banned from school because junk food can damage students health and it will be better if they can bring their own lunch box to school.

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Aimen's WSC writing prep


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Do you know junk food? Junk food is a food that containing high levels of calories from sugar or fat with little fiber, protein ,vitamins or minerals. If we eat junk food every day it can make alot of disadvatage for our health and junk food can make addicted taste. and that is why it should be banned at school. At school that is the place of education.
 At school it is not only students there are teachers too. If the teacher eating infront of their student we believe student will also wanted to eat junk food too. They also get the negative impacts from junk food. Why student didn’t bring mini lunch box from their parents?
 I believe that if we eat home made food it is going to be more healthy than junk food. But most student didn’t like healthy food because the addicted taste from junk food. And school have a responsibility for take caring  students so they make sure  they are all healthy, happy and other things to make the student happy.
Why I agree wth this motion  because It also make a bad impacts for our future. Such as eating every day until  we have a addicted taste with junk food. And junk food give alot  of fats ,calories ,sugar and some student can get bigger emotion.
How about the disease it not only illness and sickness it can be habit too. so the proof is based on www.dailyinformation.com said that 71% students  in United states eat junk food every day died because they didn’t like vegtables.

In conclusion junk food is unhealthy because it can make alot of disadvantage to our health and addicted taste of junk food. Andit make bad impacts to children emotion  and other things.

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