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Vely's WSC writing 2 (G.4)


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Motion:That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero.

   Hello dear someone who read my writing! Today’s motion is “That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero”. I want to define this motion. Based on wikipedia.org.com, Modern myth is a modern technologies such as publishing,movies,and the internet allow folktales. Based on www.dictionary.com, Superhero is a type of costumed heroic character who’s like appear at the modern myth or it might be movie.
   I agree with this motion because it make us not boring about modern myth
   It make us not boring with another modern myth. Based on www.owlacataion.com, We need life with modern myth.To make the modern myth have variation and unique. Because not only parents that like to watch or using the modern myth. But children also can use modern myth. And to make children interesting with the modern myth,it can form by the superhero.
   It can teach us about culture in that myth. Based on www.culturemyth.com, Five characters for the example Wonder woman,Batman,The Hulk,Supermen and The Silver Surfer.Theese characters teach us cultural and narrative concepts,philosophical,the characteristic of good and evil,the anti-hero,and the savior
  Modern myth that contain superheroes can inspire us.How can superheroes inspire us? Based on spiritualnaturalist.org, Superheroes is inspire us from their attitude. For the example is if the superheroes help others,it inspire us to help each others. But we cant follow the bad behaviour like gambling,killing someone,etc
 
   In conclusion,modern myth in the form of superhero is need to our world because it can teach usabout culture,make us not boring with modern myth and inspire us of their behaviour and attitude. And I believe that this motion should stand.

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Vely's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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Motion: That every country must explore the moon

   Hello everybody! My name is Veli. And our motion today is “That every country must explore the moon”.First of all,I want to tell you about the definition from this motion.A country is the region that is idenfitified as a differences national entity in the political geography. There are various country in this world like Indonesia,China,India,Japan,etc. Moon is a planet which exist on the night. And Moon exploration is when we search and explore the moon.                                                                                           
    I agree with this motion because all people want to know how to live at the Moon
   All people want to know how is the situation there,is moon good,bad,dirty? Based on www.airspacemag.com, is about curiosity about the moon. How is live over there? Many people are ask about this things. Based on en.m.wikipedia.org.com, At first,the missions go to the moon is so many mission space that have to do for learning the earth’s natural satellite. Luna 2 is the first spacecraft that reaches the surfaces of purposeful succeed in 13 September 1959.
   We must move some of earth population. Based on www.planetsave.com, the earth’s population is 6,8 BILLION people.We need a place to put all this people right? Or the population for the animals will be destroy. Based on www.savetheplanet.com, If there are many population in our earth,We should provide another place to this people to have live. If there is no place,our earth will be full of place. And the population will be mines.
   At my first reason I said that all people want know about the moon. The proof is based on gizmodo.com,2000 people of America have to step at the moon. So another country should step on the moon.
   In conlusion,every country must explore the moon because every people should know the life at the moon and we must move some people at our Earth. And I believe that this motion should stand.














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Uwais' WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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THAT  OUR  WORLD  NEEDS MODERN MYTH IN THE FORM OF SUPERHERO

Hello, my name is Wan Nur Uwais Binti Wan Bazli ,and you can call me Uwais , todays motions THAT OUR WORLD NEEDS MODERN MYTH IN THE FORM OF SUPERHERO . Let me tell you what is the meaning of world , world is the earth or globe ,considered as a planet ,what is superhero?,superhero is a hero ,especially in children comic book and television cartoons,possessing extraodinary ,often magical power based on www.dictionary.com
I disagree with this motion because if people think superhero is real , if the people is in danger they will call for the superhero because they think it’s real , if the superhero is not real they could just die because the people want superhero to save them and superhero sometimes  is bad how could the superhero save them because bad superhero don’t want to help each others.
And my first argument is if the people put people that have magoc power is that going to be weird? Like superman , superman can shut lazer from his eyesis that possible ? for me NO , superman can fly....., but why we couldn’t fly ?,and he will never be died but we will be died , superhero is too cartoons , like TEENTITANS GO ,etc for me is too cartoons /little .
And my second argument is if superhero is put to modern myth it won’t be so adult thing so children can look to right? If there was disgusting thing the childwill look at it to because they thing is cartoon , so they will see it and they will be so excited for looking it and the parent will so fun watching it until they don’t know , if there child is looking at disgusting thing
              THANK YOU  

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Andro's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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THAT EVERY COUNTRY MUST EXPLORE THE MOON 

A country is a region that is identified as a distinct national entity in political geography.
A moon is an astronomical body that orbits planet earth.
I disagree with this motion
My argument is
1.    Because in the moon, there is nothing we can do or if you go to the moon and no oxygen you will die. So thats why some country dont want to go to the moon or you ansist them they just keep saying no or else. For example, some country want to invite every country in the world and the invitation is “that every country must explore the moon” and then some country dont want to go to the moon and then the country that make the invitation ansist the country that dont want to go to the moon and its a bad thing to ansist other people.
2.    Because is taking to long if we go to the moon like 4 days, 5 days or even it can take for years or months and sometimes if we land on the moon is always landing with an extremely landing process like whooo mayday mayday. For example like we visit to the moon with a rocket and then we land on the moon with a hardest landing like a plane and how you would feel about that. You will feel like your scared like after you ride a roaler coaster or after you ride a jet plane and of course you will have a headhace and you will puke

My conclusion is because we cant breathe in there and there is nothing in there

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Nisrina's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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Students should not have internet access freely

First I want to give a definition of the motion. Student is a kid that still the age of studying or learning and internet is a data that can open many application that can help us to find somethings that we wanted for the example is google is using an internet. So i believe this motion should fall because i had many reason thats not supporting this motion.
        The first agrument is, I disagree because student can learn more from internet. And i believe that student can use the internet positively. Based on school.projects.com that many students and even teachers in the school use the internet for studying. For a real example Ms.Nita is my math teacher she told us that we shoul bring a laptop or ipad with a internet, we use the internet for studying math ofcourse and we don’t use it for playing.
       My second agrument is, I disagree because internet helping the students to find the answers of the questions by not cheating. And i would like to say that parents want that their child to get a good score right!, and if the student browsing in internet they got many knowledge that they doesn’t know yet, so i believe that students can have a internet access freely.
      My third agrument is, I disagree because students already know how that they can use internet for. Students learn from their teachers and students know what should they browse and not. Teachers ofcourse didn’t told their student about the negative of an internet but teachers told us to avoid the negative things in the internet. So i believe this is my last argument and so we go to the conclusion.
     The conclusion is i disagree with this motion because internet help us to learns and internet help us to find anykinds of mattery that we want to know. And i believe that this motion should fall because students must have the internet access freeely. 

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Nayyara's WSC writing 2 (G.5)


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Students should not have internet freely

First of all, students are those who study at school. Nowadays, many teachers give their student assigments that relate to the internet. According to Merriam-Webster Dictionary, internet is a communication network that connects computer networks around the world. Through internet, we can access pictures, videos, and articles. Even though internet is very useful and helpful, if students are given permission to access the internet freely, it will cause negative impacts. So, I agree that students should not have internet access freely.
Th first negative impact is that students will be able access negative information that can be found easily on internet, such ashoax news and any thing that not true. Hoax news is the news that is not true, it can be form as a pictures, articles, videos, etc. How about students believe it so they can spread the news to their friends. For example: aliens are coming to the earth, there is a ghost in your bath room and it can bite you, no that’s not true. If they spread the hoax news so they can get a punishment from the government.
The second negative impact is that students will be addicted to the internet and become anti-social. The examples of things that make students addicted are games and social media. Games on the internet are addicted because students are interested and like to play it. It can make students become anti-social because they choose to plat on the internet rather than to play outside with friends.
The third negative impact is that students will be lazy and do not want to study. It is because they choose to play or to access internet rather than to study. Because of that, their grades at school will be down graded.
So, I agree that students should not have internet access freely. They may access internet, but under the watch of their parents.

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Nayyara's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That every country must explore the moon

According to Merriam-Webster Dictionary, moon is the large, round object that circles the earth and that shines at night by reflecting light from the sun. It is also the earth’s natural satellite that orbites the earth. Based on Wikipedia, the first moon exploration was done by two Americans, Neil Armstrong and Edwin “Buzz” Aldrin in 1969 by using Apollo 11. So, it can be said that the country that has ever explored the moon is America. After that, in the following years, countries like China, India, and Japan also suceed in exploring the moon. Since there are many countries that already explored the moon, in my opinion, I disagree that every country must explore the moon.
            The first reason of why I disagree is that it is too expensive to buy the rocket to explore the moon, especially for developing countries, such as Sri Lanka, Thailand, Laos, etc. More than that, the price of astronaut clothes is also to expensive to buy for one people and in every countries have many society.
            The second reason is that representatives are enough. In my opinion, it is enough for one representatives or two to explore the moon and provide the others knowledge abut it. Moreover, in this globalization era, the information about moon can be found everywhere, such as from blogs, website, television, etc.
            The third reason is that not every person is capable to explore the moon. It means that the astronaut should be smart and have certain knowledge about moon and rocket. Also, not every country has human recources that really capable to explore the moon and give additional knowledge about the moon will not be wasted.
            So, based on those reasons, such as the expensive cost to go to the moon, representatives are enough, and the human recources problems, I disagree that every country must explore the moon. It is because the knowledge of the moon can easily be found everywhere.

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Nayla's WSC Writing 1 (G.5)


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Students Should Not Have Internet Access Freely

Hello, My name’s Naila and this is my writing under the motion ‘Students shouldn’t have internet access freely’. Firstly, Students are people who study at school. While the word ‘internet’ is an electronic communications network that connects computer networks and organizational computer facilities around the world.
            Internet can be accessed by everyone, including students. Internet has many advantages. For instance, internet can be used for searching informations, studying and many more.
            I disagree with the statement and I believe that students can have internet access freely. It will be a problem if the kid have to do his homework, and it needs internet. Prepare yourselves; it’s going to be a story.
So, this kid was told by his parents to ask permission first before using internet. At the same time his parents are busy at work. He called his parents. They didn’t hear it or turned off their phone, so this kid don’t know what to do. After remember that the homework’s for tomorrow, he decided to go to his friend’s house. His friend who is also doing the homework won’t help him and said “Everyone in our class have one, how could you don’t?”.  He waited for his parents, but they went home at night, when he’s already asleep.
Next day, he went to school like nothing happened. His teacher asked him  to submit the homework. Because he didn’t do the homework, he got the consequences.
In conclusion, not-free internets are enough trouble.

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Khansa's WSC writing 3 (G.4)


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 That parents deserves to put GPS on their children

Good afternoon everybody, my name is khansa. Our motion today is ‘That parents deseves to put GPS on their children’. First of all I would like to define the motion. Parents is a caragiver of the offspring in their own species.GPS is a sattelite-based navigation made up of atleast 24 sattelite. Child is a human being between the stage of birth and puberty.
        As we know now, our technologies is advancing, in the past. There are handphone, and now, there are haedphone,earphone,ipad, laptop, and others. That what happened with GPS too, anyway, GPS is so important for us, we know our direction because of GPS. Thats why I agree with the motion, because GPS is so important for us. With it,we know or direction to go to our destination. If we use it more and more, we will memorized the direction, and we will not use frequenly GPS, and we will not be addicted with the GPS that can timed consumed us with our families.
         My fist reason is because its so useful for us, its so important for us, that the only one our street sign that is easy, inexpensive, and practical. So why their parents not deserves to put GPS  on their childern? The proof is based on www.corporate.findlaw.com, ‘Parents may not to be able to keep their childern in sign all time, but GPS technology allows them to attrack their location almot anywhere. Even if we felt sorrow with the GPS that placed in the car, now we can use bracelet GPS.For the example, there is a child that play in the playground on the mall, their parents drop their child and their parents give a bracelet GPS to their child and they go to other place. So, their child will be not stole by the thief.If the child was stoled by the thief,their parents will know where did the thief bring their child.Can we imagine, how we can live without GPS? There will be many kids stoled by the thief,and the thief will get so many benefit by stolen mwny kids.Even if the GPS are expensive, all parents will do anything for their child right? So why we not use GPS?

        So, in conclusion, I agree with the motion because GPS is so important, we can use it to tell us the direction,and prevent or kids stolen by the thief and I believe that the motion should stand.

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Aca's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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Student shouldn’t get internet access freely

Internet. It’s really common in our life. We use the internet to browse, search things , streaming , opening the online shop , maybe and downloading apps. In WSC (world scholar’s cup), we need internet access to browse material for writing and to browse points of your debate.
So, let’s go to my main argument. I disagree with this motion because : students can use the internet to browse knowledge or even playing quiz with their teacher! As you see, not all stuff in the internet is bad. And, students are not going to browse bad things anyway. Even if they do, at least they are still students. So the grown ups should educate them, and usually students that browse bad things are affected by their environment. So, the grown ups that had been educated for a long time should change their lifestyle. So they will not affect the students.
My first reason is that students can use the internet for browsing knowledge like the www.knowledge.ca , wikipedia , www.quizlet.com , kahoot! , and more. Students are learning and studying. So they will not open weird articles. And they can search so much educational and useful articles like www.mathgoodies.com/articles/improve_your_gradeshtml.com . It show us to understand math and improve your grade at math. Or you can open www.quizlet.com  it had quiz. Superfun quiz that you and your classmates can play.
So there are so many links that you can open to increase your knowledge and can be useful if you don’t understand a subject or to leran something that make you interested to learn about.
One of my reasons are the scholars that are students needs internet access to browse. Scholars are people that joined the World Scholar’s Cup. If there are student scholars, and they do not get free internet access freely, it may cause us trouble because the motion that the World Scholar’s Cup had given are hard and we need to browse points of the debate and writing materials. To know more about hte world scholar’s cup , just browse www.scholarscup.org  and wsc will give you a very interesting experience and it was very educational.
My third argument is the internet can make students get money. How? Well learning DIY things and sell it at school! Yes. There are soo many DIY channels or link to help us get money or make it as a hobby. There are more than DIY things. You can browse how to cook and sell it at school! And, as you know slime and squishies are very popular these days. So, you can browse how to make DIY craft, slime , squishies and more! And of course, it will give us.... money. You can browse how to cook and sell it at school. So internet is not only educational but will give us money.
My final argument is students needs refreshing from all the homework, school , and teacher’s anger. So, they can go to youtube, browse nice videos that was suitable for their age and something fun. I am sure that student’s mind is clean and all good. And,  students are already responsible enough to browse their own for something that is suitable for their age. And i belive one of the reason people made youtube is to make students happy .
So i believe that this motion should fall because students use the internet to browse educational and useful. Well some of you may think, is youtube videos educational?  Well, so many of them can make us earn money and make us happy

By: Aca ( tazkia sabina ) 

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Abin's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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That every country must explore the moon

Country means a nation with its own goverment ,explore means travel in a unfamiliar area.in www.universe today.com  and futurism.com said that every country must explore the moon .every country must know the final frontier . I agree because we will be exploring with spaceships .some  countries that already go to the moon  like uni soviet ,america, japan . at my research at yahoo .com .more countries are planning to like canada 488$ million , india 1,4billion$  and others .spaceX.com their helping countries . making space ships for planning countries.                                                                 
Some countries are going to use rovers, orion ,orbitter. Their going to launch in the years .2017,2018,2019,2021.2024. i believe im really amazed by the people that have walke themoon .like neil armstrong ,pete conrad ,alan bean.i have found reasearch of planets that is going to be explored lika mars 2033 ,america is the one that is going to explore.
People want to see the outside earth , other planets .searching other source of live  . but producer of films are maybe warning us with films like the film life.rovers that going to be used by countries is limited. Countries th are going to use roves is america from NASA,canada,i ndia and others
The company that is going to help them is space X and anothers. They want to explore like the film the martian.i hope they succeded the launch ,as they launch it means they are succeded.rovers has been tested spaceships has been made .but still waiting for the right astranaut.thank you that all from me im abin the waffle boy.

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Radith's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans

Hello everybody my name is Radith and todays is that zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans. First of all I would like to explain what zodiac is. Zodiac is an area of the sky centerd upon the ecliptic, the apparent path of the sun across the celestial sphere over the course of the year. Ok so I agree with this motion because some of people believe that zodiac signs can predict what to do and whats heppening next and they got it all wrong. There are so many zodiac foe example: aries,virgo,leo,taurus,etc. And each one of the zodiac have the negative side. For example:
Aries: Aries people are learning how to use energy, but often they got it wrong .  And if they get it wrong maybe something bad could happen like ran out of electricity and other bad things.
And my second example is Virgo zodiac:
Virgo people critizize themself more than anyone else. The bad thing that can happen to this problem is that if you are choosen to performed and you critizize your self they will be not comfortable and maybe your performance will be bad.
And my last example is Pisces zodiac:
Pisces people dont have boundaries. If they have no boundaries just imagine they have no boundaries of working they work for 24 hour strait the could get sick and maybe even going to hospital.

So my consclution is That zodiac signs and the prediction can destroy humans so I think this motion should stand thank you thats all from me wassalamualaikum wr.wb

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Naura's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero

First of all I’d like to define the motion. Modern myth is a traditional story. Superhero is someone that helps other people

I agree with this motion because when someone knows about superhero some of them might want to be like them and it can make kids to help each other.

My first reason is it can make kids learn to help others in any grade it can make kids help each other it inspired them to do something good.

My second reason is for a story that make everyone interested about the story maybe some people is bored about other traditional story.

My third reason is for kids they might be interested in the story so they dream to be something useful in the future



So the conclusion is I think this motion should stand

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Nuri's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans

The zodiac is an area of the sky centered upon the ecliptic, the apparent path of the Sun across thecelestial sphere over the course of the year. Zodiac signs and the prediction can destroy humans, because, fortune tellers that predict the future with stars can be wrong. Humans are not perfect, correct? If so, fortune tellers aren’t perfect.
Also, the person who believes the zodiac predictions can get hurt. For example, a zodiac prediction said the person will be rich and lucky the next day. But, actually, the person was having a very unlucky day. This is the reason why zodiac predictions can destroy humans.
And, the elderly who believe in zodiac predictions can get very hurt, because their bones are more vulnerable and their sense of sight is very poor. If the elderly continue to believe zodiac predictions, then they may tell their next generation to believe zodiac predictions, and their next generation may get hurt, because they believe in zodiac predictions.
It may make them stop believing in their parents. Young generation should obey their parents to have a bright future. If they only rely on the zodiac predictions, then, there is a possibility they may not have a bright future ahead of them.
Their parents should also not believe in zodiac predictions, or tell their children about the predictions. Because even though children should obey their parents, a parent should be good and advisable for their children to have a healthy next generation and to have a bright future.
An example of a zodiac prediction is the daily predictions in the Gemini zodiac. It says that certain days it is a day of success. But, what happens when those days are not really full of success for the Gemini-born. Another example is a daily predictions for those who have Aries as their zodiac signs say that certain days the Aries-born will earn good money. But what happens when the Aries aren’t lucky enough to have such fortune.
In conclusion, zodiac signs and predictions can destroy humans because it may be wrong, and the ones who believe in those predictions will not trust their friends, family or relatives. They won’t be social with others and they’ll always be reading and wanting to know about their zodiac. Socializing is important in a person’s life. Because, if a person is in trouble and they can’t find a way out, they can ask help from other people. 

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Caca's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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THAT ZODIAC SIGN AND THE PREDICTION DESTROY
HUMAN
Zodiac is a band of the sky along which the sun, the moon, and most of the planets move. It is divided into twelve parts,with each part named for nearby constellation.
I agree with this motion because they will wasting their time for read and search about zodiac and its not usefull for their future.And they can use that time for something useful for their future like study.when they use that time for something useful they can be a productive human. When they become productive human they can be useful for their self and another human.
My next agrument is some times zodiac prediction is wrong .when you  believe with the prediction so you believe with something that you don‘t know it’s true or it’s lie.when you trust zodiac sign and zodiac prediction the writer will happy because thre someone that trust their writting ,but he/she just write anything what they know . we can’t trust zodiac because it’s not true. Example my zodiac is aquarius and I search what is aquarius characteristic acoording www.astrology-zodiac-signs.com said aquarius characteristic is independent,mysterious,and free-spirited i think i’m not myterious.
My last agrumment is when they trust the zodiac they will like about that ,so they always browse and they will be addiction and they don’t want listen  what their family ,parents,friend,etc said their mind already like that information when they become like that they will be chance they not like to sociality.
And the conclusion is I believe that this motion should stand because its can break our future and zodiac signs and the prediction its true it’s fall we can’t to believe that prediction .


By:caca

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Indana's WSC writing 2 (G.4)


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That Our World Needs Modern Myths in the Form of Superhero

Hello my name is Indana....today I write this writing with the motion”That Our World Needs Modern Myths In The Form Of Superhero”. First I will tell you the meaning of MODERN MYTHS.Modern myths is the opposites of fact, something that is generally accepted but untrue. And I will tell you the meaning of SUPERHERO. Superhero is a typr of costumed heroic character who possesses supernatural.
And second, I will say that “I believe this statment should fall”because it will make the world full of many myths of superhero that sometimes it’s lie.And all people will know about the bad things of superhero,and they will don’t know the good things of superhero.So they will says”What?This superhero will make the world bad and make all people sick everyday...”and they tell to all peole,so it make superhero in the bad thinking of public.
So my 1st argument is...We shouldn’t make the myth of superhero,because it will make the people who make superhero sad,and they can’t make that superhero film again.and base on www.bbc.com that Iron man or Avenger,they are superhero but they have been a coulped of less that Fantastic Four and enough dubious Hulks to smash the spirit.So that a myths of superhero,that myths can make all people know about that myths,so the people that like the myths,will share the myths to all people taht still don’t know about it.
And my 2nd argument is .....we should’n make the myths of superhero,because you can look the best superhero film that you like and you have fun right with the story?So why we have to make the bad myths of superhero?.base on www.bbc.com that superhero have existed for as long as stories,before writing and across every culture from which we can find evindence. So that the 2nd myths that not it’s tells right,because the people who make the myths not know all about the real story,so they make a lie story[sometimes].
And my 3rd or my last argument tells about the bad things that can make people or the superhero in the big problem.The superhero that have been myths by people,they get big problem now,because many people talk about the bad myths of superhero,so he or she get the big problem,and they can be bad film ever.Base on www.bbc.com Bruce Wayne superpowers are their limitless credit cards,which also explains why Agamemnon least heroic of all heroes,surely is so concerned about acquiring more booty.So that proof tell that we have to make the superhero get out and never shown again.And this myths are very evel,because it make superhero films get out and never shown.
And the last or the,the end of my paragraph is telling about my conclusion or how I will support superhero.this sentences will be the ending sentences of my writing,so just go to my conclusion for this motion and my writing...                           
So in conclusion:

*why we have to make the Bad thing of superhero?They make us feel better,and they can make us not boring at home with the film that not clear enough for us....                                                 
Now you already know my writing until the 1st and my 6th paragraph.                   
HAVE YOU ENJOY MY WRITING.....BYE......!!

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Indana's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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That zodiac signs and the prediction destroy humans

Hello everybody my name is Indana. Today’s motion is “that zodiac signs and the prediction destroy humans” First I will tell you the definition of zodiac and prediction.Z odiac is an area of the sky centered upon the ecliptic,the apparent path of the sun across the satelite sphere over the course of the year. The examples are Aries,Taurus,Gemini,Cancer,Leo,Virgo,Libra,Scorpio,Sagittarius,  Capricorn, Aquarius and Pisces.a prediction or forecast,is a statement about an uncertain event.it is often,but no always,based upon experience or knowledge.
I agree with this motion because...human done know their zodiac by telling from his or her family,and because there so many negative side of zodiac  signs.based on www.astrogyclub.com ,many negative side of each zodiac signs.the example is Aries,Aries people are learning how to use energy,but they often get it wrong.Leo people show themselves as being much larger than they feel inside.But,acctually there’s no change and the same feeling to them.
It is interesting to look at the people you know in terms of their zodiac.The sun represent the quality of the person’s spiritual radience,if they give their spirit the chance to radiate by expressing the sign.based on www.scared-texts.com ,zodiac signs tells about our sun.But that statment can be wrong.We can’t free to believe zodiac signs.If there’s no any proof,we can’t believe firmly,because there is no strong evidence.
In conclusion we shouldn't believe zodiac signs and prediction fastly, because zodiac signs are no all of the signs are true.so for support my statement I will say”I believe this motion should stand”                                                                            


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Khansa's WSC writing paper 2 (G.4)


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That zodiac zign and the prediction destroy human



First of all, I would like to define the motion. Zodiac sign is an area of the sky centered upon the ecliptic,the apparent path of the sun across the celestial sphere over the course of the year. Human is common name of Homo sapiens, unique extant species of the genus Homo.

          On to my argument. I agree with the motion because zodiac sign is not always to be the only one we trust, they are not always right. The zodiac sign doesn't mean anything, it's just a hoax, it's human prediction, if human not always right, so human's prediction are not always right too.  How can we trust the stars that didn't do anything, they just make sone shape and we trust them to know our future? Are you guys are foolish? We are a smart people,and we can determine the future by our self, with study hard and pray hard.The proof is when I go to some where with my family, I use google map,the google map show the left lane, but in the left lane there is dead-end street. It shows that human and what human make were not always right. Now, let me ask you for the example, do you want to gullibe by the zodiac just like that? Of course if you already be gullible you will feel fooled right? That's what I mean,if we always believe them, we will guided down the wrong path, and it can be harmful for us, finally, it can destroy us.
            My second reason is if they only trust the zodiac, they cannot be free to think the other thing. If their family talk,they will ignored what their families talking about. They will always busy with their zodiac, and busy to know more about what is zodiac, what does it mean and many else. If they still like that, they will be bad people for their future, and the world will be disorderly, and it can destroy us.
            In conclusion , I agree with the motion because zodiac are not always right and if we always trust zodiac, we will busy with the zodiac and our rarely comunicate with other people, and I believe that the motion should stand.



-Khansa-

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 That our world need modern myth in the form of superhero


Firstly, I want to define the motion.Modern myth is a traditional story that consist of events that are ostensibly,or something that accepted but not really.Superhero is part of uniquely American mythology that ever save the world and have power.In a philosophical context,the world is the whole of the physical Universe , or an ontological world.
       On to my argument. I agree with the motion because modern myth in the form of superhero is fun, children can easy to understand if the subject is fun, and they will not be bored too. Not only for children, it's useful too for adult person, if they already understand about modern myth in the form of superhero, they can make something new from that, they can be more creative.
        My  first reason is because the child can understandable the subject, because it is in the form of superhero. Also,the children will not bored and will not confused to study about the subject and will be more smart. For example:there is a child that study in some school. The subject is about modern myth,but without in the form of superhero. Of course without in theform of superhero, it looks like so seriously, the child didn't understand what's the teacher talking about. Finally, he always confused when meet something that related with modern myth. Until one day, the child move to the other school because the child was confused. In his new school, the teachers also explain about modern myth, but it's differents, this time is in theform of superhero. Finally, the child understand the subject and the child be a smart kid. The proof is 90% of student didn't understand serious subject and bored subject.
        My second reason is, not only for kids, it's useful too for adult person. When they already undertand about modern myth,they can make something new for the future, they can make technology more advanced than before. Imagine,every billion people in this world make one new things that can change the world, can we imagine, how much technology advaces we? Of course they are billions too. For example:Every people in this world make one new things that can advanced our technology, and this world can be so beautiful. Imagine, only one little tiny things can change the world, of course every people think it's impossible, but if we do it together, it's more than possible. The proof is, if poeple said  one little tiny tree can save the polluted earth, why we cant?
         My third reason is, what's wrong if it is in the form of superhero? Superhero is a good example, they are people that save the world, they were meritorious to the world, the world owed him, and it's good, nothing is wrong with that. Even there is the fiction one, it's good too for us. The children's imagination will be high, and they will be a good people for the future. The proof is if their imagination was high,they can use it to get some good job for their future.
          In conclusion, i agree with the motion because they are so many useful of modern myth in the form of superhero,like make easy to understand, change the world, and many else, and I believe that the motion should stand

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