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Vely's WSC writing prep


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 The junk food should be banned from school

First of all I would like to define the motion. Junk food is food that has low nutritional value,typically produced in the form of packaged snacks needing little or no preparation. Based on www.fatfreekitchen.com, the example of junk food are fast food like Pizza,Burger,Fried chicken,etc. And there also snacks&desserts like hot-dogs,tacos,etc. Junk food is unhealthy food but there are many people that eat junk food and they look alright.
      I agree with this motion because there are negative effects when student eat it.
      Junk food is dangerous for our health. Because based on en.m.wikipedia.org, When junk food is consumed very often,the excess fat,carbohydrates,and processed sugar found in junk food contributes to an increased risk of obesity,cardiovascular disease,diabetes,and many other chronic health conditions. And fast food also including junk food. And fast food also dangerous for us because food is fuel for your body.. Fast food isnt necessarily bad,but in many cases its highly processed and contains large amounts of carbohydrates,added sugar,unhealthy fats,and salt (sodium). Theese foods are often high in calories yet offer little or no nutritional value. Based on www.jamesclear.com, many people that has to eat junk food is go to hospital because they are have illness such as heart disease,diabetes,etc.
     If supposing junk food be sell on the school/canteen,its also waste students money. Because they will be loss to buy the junk food. On indonesian moneu,Rupiah. Junk food price is 20 thousand. Find money only 20 thousand its no easy for every one. Based on www.healtyjunkfood.com,Junk food is helpful not have even more detrimental. Because junk food is unhealthy food. We can buy another food that more good and make our body healty. There are fruit,vegetable,etc. It will be more useful and it more healthy and contain many protein,vitamin,etc
     Junk food make children stop concitrate from their lesson at school. Children need to concitrate when they study. If not concitrate,lesson that teachers teach will not go on their brain. Based on www.Healthyeating.sfgate.com,According to Women's and Children's health network,diet has a significant effect on children's study habits. Junk food and food with high sugar content deplete energy. Levels and the ability to concentrate for extented periods of tome. Energy and focus are especially crucial for school-age children. Children set the foundation for life-long habits in their youth,making junk food particularly development. Physical activity is also essential for children of all ages,and regularly eating junk food dues not provide the necessary nutrients children need for sufficient energy to engage in physical activity is harmful to physical and mental well being and may also exclude a child from critical social development.
     In conclusion,Junk food should be banne from school because Junk food is dangerous for our health,we will be loss if we buy junk food and it will stop concitrate students when study.And I believe that this motion should stand.

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Khansa's WSC writing prep


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That Alice has no obligation to obey the laws of Wonderland
First of all, Alice is a person that have a high imagination, until she can create her own imagination world. In that world, she have a lot of friends that are a kind, smart, and good friend. Laws is a kind of something that suppose to be obey'd by the stranger, it's a kind of rules or something. Like what I said it early, Wonderland is a world that is come from Alice's imagination, it's a awesome world, because her friend in Wonderland is have feeling too, like a real world.
  On to my argument. Like what I said it above, Wonderland is only Alice's imagination, so, why she have to obey the laws of her world imagination it self? If that is her world imagination, she can do what she want to do right? And second, actually, Wonderland  is a place for free, we can do anything what we want to do. From the name, it's 'Wonder', it means everything that we woder it for a long, long time, and we wonder that everything is free for us right?
The first reason why Alice didn't have to obey of all laws in Wonderland is because Woderland is naturally Alice's imagination, what her want to do is in there, all friends that she crave is in there, that's what she wonder it for a long, long time. She imagine that she being hero for the Wonderland, she talk to a queen in Wonderland, she can do a lot of things out there! And how she obey the rules if her imagination it self? But she didn't have any laws in her imagination?
My second reason is, because in fact, Wonderland is a place for free, it didn't have any laws,  so what Alice have to obey for?? "Wonder" symbolize that we can do everythings in there, we can be free, we can do what we want to do, and many else. Even if there is some laws in the Wonderland, Alice didn't have to obey a lot of it so much right? So what will happend if Alice didn't obey the laws? Be putted into prison? Be killed? What?! In her imagination? Are you kidding me?

  In conclusion I agree with the motion because Wonderland is Alice's imagination and because Wonderland actually means "free".

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Indana's WSC writing prep


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THAT MODERN WORLD NEED MYTHS MORE THAN ANCIENT WORLD


Modern World is advances in all of human activity-politics, industry, society, economics,              transport, communication,                                 mechanization, science,m edicine,                    technology, and culture, and ancient world is the old world.
          I believe this motion should fall because sometimes myths are conspiracy,and conspiracy is a group of people who want to make a plan that want to fall other people.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
           So my 1st argument is because myths more than ancient world is the biggest myths. Because in ancient world done have about 79% of myths, so it's become many myths that the modern world have when need myths more than ancient world. Based on https.//www.quora.com That myths cannot convence generation.Except the enomically backward,Hance Bhagvad Geeta is the only answer to the whole human race. So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
             And my 2nd argument is that because world consist of society,so the society will objection to get many myths. So when there is people that said "Huh,this world get many myths I hate it,I want to die".How we can stop it??We can stop it with reduce myths in midern world.Based on www.listverse.com The example of ancient world myths is Vampires.If you hate the last coulpe of years of horman-driven angst-inspired vampire media,try living in Medieval Eroupe.Back then,belief in vampire was so prevalent that barely a single country didn't consider them terrifying fact of life.When crops failed or a baby was born with a slight deformithy,you'd better believe vampires got the blame.So modern world not need myths more than ancient world.
               So in conclusion:modern world not need myths more than ancient world,because the society will objection and myths in the world is increase,because as you know 79% is ancient world so 21% again the world already covered by the myths.



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Naura's wsc writing prep


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That junk food sshould be baned from school
Today I will write under the motion that junk food should be baned from school and now iwant to define the motion junk food is a food that is calorie dense  and nutrient poor so i agree with this motion.
My first argument is it can cause a bad future becasue it have bad desease because we cant learn well so it can cause a bad future
My second argument is that it is wasting money because it is not healthy so it waste money and it can cause you lots of desease that is dangerous
My third argument is thatjunk food can cause deaths slowly when your getting older and older because your getting attached to it so you always eat it

So the concluson is i belive that this motion should stand because it is dangerous and it can caus desease that make a bad future for us

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Nisrina's WSC writing prep


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That junk food should be banned from school
First, I want to explain the definition of junk food. Based on merriam-webster.com junk food is a food that has high calories and low nutritional content. And i agree with this motion so i believe that this statement should stand. Based on jamesclear.com thst junk food had a poor nutrition that causes heart problems, high blood pressure, and a host of other health ailments. Besides that eating junk food causes high level of Diabetes. So i agree with this motion because eating junk food are suppose to be banned from school and eating junk food causes a really bad disease.
My first agrument or reason, I agree with this motion because students can’t learn well because of eating junk food at school that causes a disease. Based on articles.mercda.com that 71 % that students in elementary school got a bad disease and thats made students can’t learn well at school. So i believe that junk food should be banned forever from school because it causes a really bad disease. No once want any disease on them, right!. So we must avoid any junk food to make our body stay healthy and we can continue studying in our school by no disorders of the disease.
My second agrument or reason, I agree because junk food contains many sugar and high calories that causes obesitys. Now many students from many school got an obesity, and the obesitys are makes students getting worst. For the axample their teacher told them to run quickly but they have an obesitys they run very slow that makes they lose from the other students. So eating junk food cause bad impact like obesitys, diabetes, and other. I believe by banning the junk food from school is a good idea.
My last agrument or reason is I agree with this motion because junk food are expensive for children. I believe that students can keep their money in their bank and they can keep that money for buying anything. If they just buying a expensive junk food its make their money decreasing. So i believe that students better buy a healthy food than buying junk food for them. So in  the conclusion i agree with this motion because junk food in the school just giving student bad impact, like whatever i said before in the paragraph.  

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Maura's wsc writing prep


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That junkfood should be banned in school

Good morning, my name is Maura Athallya Moza. Today  our motion is that junkfood should be banned in school.
First of all I want to tell the definition of junkfood. Junk  food is food that is not good for your healthy because it contains high amount of fat or sugar. I agree with this motion because first, it cause fat example:hot dogs,burger and sandwiches have slabs of cheese layerd on the feeling.These  also have mayonise spread on it which also contains excessive fat. The oil used for the fries is fattening.
Added sugar; The quantities of added sugar in the food that we usually consume.not to ignore that added food in the sodas and colas.
And also diabetes.the sugar in the colas,sodas and beverage contain high amount of sugar.the absence of other nutrients in junk food to bring the best out of sugar causes adverse effects on your child.
The topping has sauce and blobs of mayonise. Salt is present in ample quantity in all the sauce used on these toppings and filling of burgers,french fries and salads. so i believe this motion should stand.


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Aca's WSC writing prep


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That junkfood should be banned

Junk food. Do you know junkfood? Junkfood is a food that contains high levels of calories, fats, and sugar with little amount of fiber,protein,vitamin,and minerals. Some of the junkfood in the packaging even had no vitamins ,minerals,fiber, or proteins! Some junkfood are expensive. I agree with this motion because  there are no advantages that junk food can do for us. Well at least there is something that junkfood can do to our body. What aca? Tell us! Ok then. Here it is : making us FAT! And making us fat is not an advantage.

My first reason is junkfood makes us suffer from so many disease : high cholesterol, high blood preassure , obesity and it can cause our heart to work harder , leading us to..... heart disease and stroke. Oh noo! It’s all bad disease! Shouldn’t we need to keep our body healthy things to the organ of our body. I found something new about junk food there is a junk food that don’t just make us fat. But.... it could also shrink your brain! Because junk food making us fat, it can make us overweight. And overweight can change the way we think, affecting our judgement and making us crave even more high calorie fodder. Oh dear. That is terrible. That means it will make us gain more weight! It is not a good thing if students in the school are all obesity. And what if the teachers got stroke? Oh noo


Ok let’s go to my second reason, shall we? Ok. The school is the place where we are preparing our future not destroying it by eating junk food! If i was in a school that supports junk food and provide junk food i will say it’s a waste of money! I believe if we eat junk food at school, it is a future destroyer. So we shall not provide junk food at school because it is contary to the purpose of the school. The school should be giving us good future but by providing junk food, it will destroy our future.

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Fira's WSC writing prep


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That junk food should be banned from school

Hi my name is Fira,our motion today is that junk food should be banned from school.Junk food is a pejorative term for cheap food containing high levels of calories from sugar or fat with little fiber,protein,vitamins or minerals.School is a place where children study.
            I agree with this motion because junk food is bad for children health.Junk food contains many oil,many sugar and many fat.They can be sick and overweight by eating too much junk food.based on www.debate.org 32% of youth are overweight and nearly 74% are unfit because they eat many junk food.Kids really hard to tell is the food good or bad because kids really like junk food and junk food taste delicious than the other food so they will be addicted to junk food.
            My first poin is if school still provide junk food many people will think that the teacher is not care to the students health.The teacher dont care for their students future because they let the students eat many junk food.And ofcourse all teacher know that junk food is bad so why they let their students eat junk food?We know that junk food is easy to make and fast to make but do teacher more care about the time then more care about their students health?All teacher want their students not sick right.
            My second point is if their parents let their children eat many junk food in school ,the parents not care for their children right.Parents can make creative break time snacks for their children. The example is:Parents can make healthy sandwich with face decorations better then burgers in the canteen. Children will be more healthy.
            My third point is their friends still disturb their friends to eat junk food so the students will still eat junk food and they will be sick again.Their parents will be mad at them but that only because their friends.
            My conclusion is junk food should be banned from school because junk food can damage students health and it will be better if they can bring their own lunch box to school.

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Aimen's WSC writing prep


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Do you know junk food? Junk food is a food that containing high levels of calories from sugar or fat with little fiber, protein ,vitamins or minerals. If we eat junk food every day it can make alot of disadvatage for our health and junk food can make addicted taste. and that is why it should be banned at school. At school that is the place of education.
 At school it is not only students there are teachers too. If the teacher eating infront of their student we believe student will also wanted to eat junk food too. They also get the negative impacts from junk food. Why student didn’t bring mini lunch box from their parents?
 I believe that if we eat home made food it is going to be more healthy than junk food. But most student didn’t like healthy food because the addicted taste from junk food. And school have a responsibility for take caring  students so they make sure  they are all healthy, happy and other things to make the student happy.
Why I agree wth this motion  because It also make a bad impacts for our future. Such as eating every day until  we have a addicted taste with junk food. And junk food give alot  of fats ,calories ,sugar and some student can get bigger emotion.
How about the disease it not only illness and sickness it can be habit too. so the proof is based on www.dailyinformation.com said that 71% students  in United states eat junk food every day died because they didn’t like vegtables.

In conclusion junk food is unhealthy because it can make alot of disadvantage to our health and addicted taste of junk food. Andit make bad impacts to children emotion  and other things.

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Vely's WSC writing 2 (G.4)


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Motion:That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero.

   Hello dear someone who read my writing! Today’s motion is “That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero”. I want to define this motion. Based on wikipedia.org.com, Modern myth is a modern technologies such as publishing,movies,and the internet allow folktales. Based on www.dictionary.com, Superhero is a type of costumed heroic character who’s like appear at the modern myth or it might be movie.
   I agree with this motion because it make us not boring about modern myth
   It make us not boring with another modern myth. Based on www.owlacataion.com, We need life with modern myth.To make the modern myth have variation and unique. Because not only parents that like to watch or using the modern myth. But children also can use modern myth. And to make children interesting with the modern myth,it can form by the superhero.
   It can teach us about culture in that myth. Based on www.culturemyth.com, Five characters for the example Wonder woman,Batman,The Hulk,Supermen and The Silver Surfer.Theese characters teach us cultural and narrative concepts,philosophical,the characteristic of good and evil,the anti-hero,and the savior
  Modern myth that contain superheroes can inspire us.How can superheroes inspire us? Based on spiritualnaturalist.org, Superheroes is inspire us from their attitude. For the example is if the superheroes help others,it inspire us to help each others. But we cant follow the bad behaviour like gambling,killing someone,etc
 
   In conclusion,modern myth in the form of superhero is need to our world because it can teach usabout culture,make us not boring with modern myth and inspire us of their behaviour and attitude. And I believe that this motion should stand.

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Vely's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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Motion: That every country must explore the moon

   Hello everybody! My name is Veli. And our motion today is “That every country must explore the moon”.First of all,I want to tell you about the definition from this motion.A country is the region that is idenfitified as a differences national entity in the political geography. There are various country in this world like Indonesia,China,India,Japan,etc. Moon is a planet which exist on the night. And Moon exploration is when we search and explore the moon.                                                                                           
    I agree with this motion because all people want to know how to live at the Moon
   All people want to know how is the situation there,is moon good,bad,dirty? Based on www.airspacemag.com, is about curiosity about the moon. How is live over there? Many people are ask about this things. Based on en.m.wikipedia.org.com, At first,the missions go to the moon is so many mission space that have to do for learning the earth’s natural satellite. Luna 2 is the first spacecraft that reaches the surfaces of purposeful succeed in 13 September 1959.
   We must move some of earth population. Based on www.planetsave.com, the earth’s population is 6,8 BILLION people.We need a place to put all this people right? Or the population for the animals will be destroy. Based on www.savetheplanet.com, If there are many population in our earth,We should provide another place to this people to have live. If there is no place,our earth will be full of place. And the population will be mines.
   At my first reason I said that all people want know about the moon. The proof is based on gizmodo.com,2000 people of America have to step at the moon. So another country should step on the moon.
   In conlusion,every country must explore the moon because every people should know the life at the moon and we must move some people at our Earth. And I believe that this motion should stand.














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Uwais' WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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THAT  OUR  WORLD  NEEDS MODERN MYTH IN THE FORM OF SUPERHERO

Hello, my name is Wan Nur Uwais Binti Wan Bazli ,and you can call me Uwais , todays motions THAT OUR WORLD NEEDS MODERN MYTH IN THE FORM OF SUPERHERO . Let me tell you what is the meaning of world , world is the earth or globe ,considered as a planet ,what is superhero?,superhero is a hero ,especially in children comic book and television cartoons,possessing extraodinary ,often magical power based on www.dictionary.com
I disagree with this motion because if people think superhero is real , if the people is in danger they will call for the superhero because they think it’s real , if the superhero is not real they could just die because the people want superhero to save them and superhero sometimes  is bad how could the superhero save them because bad superhero don’t want to help each others.
And my first argument is if the people put people that have magoc power is that going to be weird? Like superman , superman can shut lazer from his eyesis that possible ? for me NO , superman can fly....., but why we couldn’t fly ?,and he will never be died but we will be died , superhero is too cartoons , like TEENTITANS GO ,etc for me is too cartoons /little .
And my second argument is if superhero is put to modern myth it won’t be so adult thing so children can look to right? If there was disgusting thing the childwill look at it to because they thing is cartoon , so they will see it and they will be so excited for looking it and the parent will so fun watching it until they don’t know , if there child is looking at disgusting thing
              THANK YOU  

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Andro's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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THAT EVERY COUNTRY MUST EXPLORE THE MOON 

A country is a region that is identified as a distinct national entity in political geography.
A moon is an astronomical body that orbits planet earth.
I disagree with this motion
My argument is
1.    Because in the moon, there is nothing we can do or if you go to the moon and no oxygen you will die. So thats why some country dont want to go to the moon or you ansist them they just keep saying no or else. For example, some country want to invite every country in the world and the invitation is “that every country must explore the moon” and then some country dont want to go to the moon and then the country that make the invitation ansist the country that dont want to go to the moon and its a bad thing to ansist other people.
2.    Because is taking to long if we go to the moon like 4 days, 5 days or even it can take for years or months and sometimes if we land on the moon is always landing with an extremely landing process like whooo mayday mayday. For example like we visit to the moon with a rocket and then we land on the moon with a hardest landing like a plane and how you would feel about that. You will feel like your scared like after you ride a roaler coaster or after you ride a jet plane and of course you will have a headhace and you will puke

My conclusion is because we cant breathe in there and there is nothing in there

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Nisrina's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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Students should not have internet access freely

First I want to give a definition of the motion. Student is a kid that still the age of studying or learning and internet is a data that can open many application that can help us to find somethings that we wanted for the example is google is using an internet. So i believe this motion should fall because i had many reason thats not supporting this motion.
        The first agrument is, I disagree because student can learn more from internet. And i believe that student can use the internet positively. Based on school.projects.com that many students and even teachers in the school use the internet for studying. For a real example Ms.Nita is my math teacher she told us that we shoul bring a laptop or ipad with a internet, we use the internet for studying math ofcourse and we don’t use it for playing.
       My second agrument is, I disagree because internet helping the students to find the answers of the questions by not cheating. And i would like to say that parents want that their child to get a good score right!, and if the student browsing in internet they got many knowledge that they doesn’t know yet, so i believe that students can have a internet access freely.
      My third agrument is, I disagree because students already know how that they can use internet for. Students learn from their teachers and students know what should they browse and not. Teachers ofcourse didn’t told their student about the negative of an internet but teachers told us to avoid the negative things in the internet. So i believe this is my last argument and so we go to the conclusion.
     The conclusion is i disagree with this motion because internet help us to learns and internet help us to find anykinds of mattery that we want to know. And i believe that this motion should fall because students must have the internet access freeely. 

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Nayyara's WSC writing 2 (G.5)


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Students should not have internet freely

First of all, students are those who study at school. Nowadays, many teachers give their student assigments that relate to the internet. According to Merriam-Webster Dictionary, internet is a communication network that connects computer networks around the world. Through internet, we can access pictures, videos, and articles. Even though internet is very useful and helpful, if students are given permission to access the internet freely, it will cause negative impacts. So, I agree that students should not have internet access freely.
Th first negative impact is that students will be able access negative information that can be found easily on internet, such ashoax news and any thing that not true. Hoax news is the news that is not true, it can be form as a pictures, articles, videos, etc. How about students believe it so they can spread the news to their friends. For example: aliens are coming to the earth, there is a ghost in your bath room and it can bite you, no that’s not true. If they spread the hoax news so they can get a punishment from the government.
The second negative impact is that students will be addicted to the internet and become anti-social. The examples of things that make students addicted are games and social media. Games on the internet are addicted because students are interested and like to play it. It can make students become anti-social because they choose to plat on the internet rather than to play outside with friends.
The third negative impact is that students will be lazy and do not want to study. It is because they choose to play or to access internet rather than to study. Because of that, their grades at school will be down graded.
So, I agree that students should not have internet access freely. They may access internet, but under the watch of their parents.

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Nayyara's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That every country must explore the moon

According to Merriam-Webster Dictionary, moon is the large, round object that circles the earth and that shines at night by reflecting light from the sun. It is also the earth’s natural satellite that orbites the earth. Based on Wikipedia, the first moon exploration was done by two Americans, Neil Armstrong and Edwin “Buzz” Aldrin in 1969 by using Apollo 11. So, it can be said that the country that has ever explored the moon is America. After that, in the following years, countries like China, India, and Japan also suceed in exploring the moon. Since there are many countries that already explored the moon, in my opinion, I disagree that every country must explore the moon.
            The first reason of why I disagree is that it is too expensive to buy the rocket to explore the moon, especially for developing countries, such as Sri Lanka, Thailand, Laos, etc. More than that, the price of astronaut clothes is also to expensive to buy for one people and in every countries have many society.
            The second reason is that representatives are enough. In my opinion, it is enough for one representatives or two to explore the moon and provide the others knowledge abut it. Moreover, in this globalization era, the information about moon can be found everywhere, such as from blogs, website, television, etc.
            The third reason is that not every person is capable to explore the moon. It means that the astronaut should be smart and have certain knowledge about moon and rocket. Also, not every country has human recources that really capable to explore the moon and give additional knowledge about the moon will not be wasted.
            So, based on those reasons, such as the expensive cost to go to the moon, representatives are enough, and the human recources problems, I disagree that every country must explore the moon. It is because the knowledge of the moon can easily be found everywhere.

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Nayla's WSC Writing 1 (G.5)


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Students Should Not Have Internet Access Freely

Hello, My name’s Naila and this is my writing under the motion ‘Students shouldn’t have internet access freely’. Firstly, Students are people who study at school. While the word ‘internet’ is an electronic communications network that connects computer networks and organizational computer facilities around the world.
            Internet can be accessed by everyone, including students. Internet has many advantages. For instance, internet can be used for searching informations, studying and many more.
            I disagree with the statement and I believe that students can have internet access freely. It will be a problem if the kid have to do his homework, and it needs internet. Prepare yourselves; it’s going to be a story.
So, this kid was told by his parents to ask permission first before using internet. At the same time his parents are busy at work. He called his parents. They didn’t hear it or turned off their phone, so this kid don’t know what to do. After remember that the homework’s for tomorrow, he decided to go to his friend’s house. His friend who is also doing the homework won’t help him and said “Everyone in our class have one, how could you don’t?”.  He waited for his parents, but they went home at night, when he’s already asleep.
Next day, he went to school like nothing happened. His teacher asked him  to submit the homework. Because he didn’t do the homework, he got the consequences.
In conclusion, not-free internets are enough trouble.

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Khansa's WSC writing 3 (G.4)


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 That parents deserves to put GPS on their children

Good afternoon everybody, my name is khansa. Our motion today is ‘That parents deseves to put GPS on their children’. First of all I would like to define the motion. Parents is a caragiver of the offspring in their own species.GPS is a sattelite-based navigation made up of atleast 24 sattelite. Child is a human being between the stage of birth and puberty.
        As we know now, our technologies is advancing, in the past. There are handphone, and now, there are haedphone,earphone,ipad, laptop, and others. That what happened with GPS too, anyway, GPS is so important for us, we know our direction because of GPS. Thats why I agree with the motion, because GPS is so important for us. With it,we know or direction to go to our destination. If we use it more and more, we will memorized the direction, and we will not use frequenly GPS, and we will not be addicted with the GPS that can timed consumed us with our families.
         My fist reason is because its so useful for us, its so important for us, that the only one our street sign that is easy, inexpensive, and practical. So why their parents not deserves to put GPS  on their childern? The proof is based on www.corporate.findlaw.com, ‘Parents may not to be able to keep their childern in sign all time, but GPS technology allows them to attrack their location almot anywhere. Even if we felt sorrow with the GPS that placed in the car, now we can use bracelet GPS.For the example, there is a child that play in the playground on the mall, their parents drop their child and their parents give a bracelet GPS to their child and they go to other place. So, their child will be not stole by the thief.If the child was stoled by the thief,their parents will know where did the thief bring their child.Can we imagine, how we can live without GPS? There will be many kids stoled by the thief,and the thief will get so many benefit by stolen mwny kids.Even if the GPS are expensive, all parents will do anything for their child right? So why we not use GPS?

        So, in conclusion, I agree with the motion because GPS is so important, we can use it to tell us the direction,and prevent or kids stolen by the thief and I believe that the motion should stand.

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Aca's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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Student shouldn’t get internet access freely

Internet. It’s really common in our life. We use the internet to browse, search things , streaming , opening the online shop , maybe and downloading apps. In WSC (world scholar’s cup), we need internet access to browse material for writing and to browse points of your debate.
So, let’s go to my main argument. I disagree with this motion because : students can use the internet to browse knowledge or even playing quiz with their teacher! As you see, not all stuff in the internet is bad. And, students are not going to browse bad things anyway. Even if they do, at least they are still students. So the grown ups should educate them, and usually students that browse bad things are affected by their environment. So, the grown ups that had been educated for a long time should change their lifestyle. So they will not affect the students.
My first reason is that students can use the internet for browsing knowledge like the www.knowledge.ca , wikipedia , www.quizlet.com , kahoot! , and more. Students are learning and studying. So they will not open weird articles. And they can search so much educational and useful articles like www.mathgoodies.com/articles/improve_your_gradeshtml.com . It show us to understand math and improve your grade at math. Or you can open www.quizlet.com  it had quiz. Superfun quiz that you and your classmates can play.
So there are so many links that you can open to increase your knowledge and can be useful if you don’t understand a subject or to leran something that make you interested to learn about.
One of my reasons are the scholars that are students needs internet access to browse. Scholars are people that joined the World Scholar’s Cup. If there are student scholars, and they do not get free internet access freely, it may cause us trouble because the motion that the World Scholar’s Cup had given are hard and we need to browse points of the debate and writing materials. To know more about hte world scholar’s cup , just browse www.scholarscup.org  and wsc will give you a very interesting experience and it was very educational.
My third argument is the internet can make students get money. How? Well learning DIY things and sell it at school! Yes. There are soo many DIY channels or link to help us get money or make it as a hobby. There are more than DIY things. You can browse how to cook and sell it at school! And, as you know slime and squishies are very popular these days. So, you can browse how to make DIY craft, slime , squishies and more! And of course, it will give us.... money. You can browse how to cook and sell it at school. So internet is not only educational but will give us money.
My final argument is students needs refreshing from all the homework, school , and teacher’s anger. So, they can go to youtube, browse nice videos that was suitable for their age and something fun. I am sure that student’s mind is clean and all good. And,  students are already responsible enough to browse their own for something that is suitable for their age. And i belive one of the reason people made youtube is to make students happy .
So i believe that this motion should fall because students use the internet to browse educational and useful. Well some of you may think, is youtube videos educational?  Well, so many of them can make us earn money and make us happy

By: Aca ( tazkia sabina ) 

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Abin's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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That every country must explore the moon

Country means a nation with its own goverment ,explore means travel in a unfamiliar area.in www.universe today.com  and futurism.com said that every country must explore the moon .every country must know the final frontier . I agree because we will be exploring with spaceships .some  countries that already go to the moon  like uni soviet ,america, japan . at my research at yahoo .com .more countries are planning to like canada 488$ million , india 1,4billion$  and others .spaceX.com their helping countries . making space ships for planning countries.                                                                 
Some countries are going to use rovers, orion ,orbitter. Their going to launch in the years .2017,2018,2019,2021.2024. i believe im really amazed by the people that have walke themoon .like neil armstrong ,pete conrad ,alan bean.i have found reasearch of planets that is going to be explored lika mars 2033 ,america is the one that is going to explore.
People want to see the outside earth , other planets .searching other source of live  . but producer of films are maybe warning us with films like the film life.rovers that going to be used by countries is limited. Countries th are going to use roves is america from NASA,canada,i ndia and others
The company that is going to help them is space X and anothers. They want to explore like the film the martian.i hope they succeded the launch ,as they launch it means they are succeded.rovers has been tested spaceships has been made .but still waiting for the right astranaut.thank you that all from me im abin the waffle boy.

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Radith's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans

Hello everybody my name is Radith and todays is that zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans. First of all I would like to explain what zodiac is. Zodiac is an area of the sky centerd upon the ecliptic, the apparent path of the sun across the celestial sphere over the course of the year. Ok so I agree with this motion because some of people believe that zodiac signs can predict what to do and whats heppening next and they got it all wrong. There are so many zodiac foe example: aries,virgo,leo,taurus,etc. And each one of the zodiac have the negative side. For example:
Aries: Aries people are learning how to use energy, but often they got it wrong .  And if they get it wrong maybe something bad could happen like ran out of electricity and other bad things.
And my second example is Virgo zodiac:
Virgo people critizize themself more than anyone else. The bad thing that can happen to this problem is that if you are choosen to performed and you critizize your self they will be not comfortable and maybe your performance will be bad.
And my last example is Pisces zodiac:
Pisces people dont have boundaries. If they have no boundaries just imagine they have no boundaries of working they work for 24 hour strait the could get sick and maybe even going to hospital.

So my consclution is That zodiac signs and the prediction can destroy humans so I think this motion should stand thank you thats all from me wassalamualaikum wr.wb

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Naura's WSC writing 1 (G.4)


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That our world needs modern myth in the form of superhero

First of all I’d like to define the motion. Modern myth is a traditional story. Superhero is someone that helps other people

I agree with this motion because when someone knows about superhero some of them might want to be like them and it can make kids to help each other.

My first reason is it can make kids learn to help others in any grade it can make kids help each other it inspired them to do something good.

My second reason is for a story that make everyone interested about the story maybe some people is bored about other traditional story.

My third reason is for kids they might be interested in the story so they dream to be something useful in the future



So the conclusion is I think this motion should stand

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Nuri's WSC writing 1 (G.5)


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That zodiac signs and the predictions destroy humans

The zodiac is an area of the sky centered upon the ecliptic, the apparent path of the Sun across thecelestial sphere over the course of the year. Zodiac signs and the prediction can destroy humans, because, fortune tellers that predict the future with stars can be wrong. Humans are not perfect, correct? If so, fortune tellers aren’t perfect.
Also, the person who believes the zodiac predictions can get hurt. For example, a zodiac prediction said the person will be rich and lucky the next day. But, actually, the person was having a very unlucky day. This is the reason why zodiac predictions can destroy humans.
And, the elderly who believe in zodiac predictions can get very hurt, because their bones are more vulnerable and their sense of sight is very poor. If the elderly continue to believe zodiac predictions, then they may tell their next generation to believe zodiac predictions, and their next generation may get hurt, because they believe in zodiac predictions.
It may make them stop believing in their parents. Young generation should obey their parents to have a bright future. If they only rely on the zodiac predictions, then, there is a possibility they may not have a bright future ahead of them.
Their parents should also not believe in zodiac predictions, or tell their children about the predictions. Because even though children should obey their parents, a parent should be good and advisable for their children to have a healthy next generation and to have a bright future.
An example of a zodiac prediction is the daily predictions in the Gemini zodiac. It says that certain days it is a day of success. But, what happens when those days are not really full of success for the Gemini-born. Another example is a daily predictions for those who have Aries as their zodiac signs say that certain days the Aries-born will earn good money. But what happens when the Aries aren’t lucky enough to have such fortune.
In conclusion, zodiac signs and predictions can destroy humans because it may be wrong, and the ones who believe in those predictions will not trust their friends, family or relatives. They won’t be social with others and they’ll always be reading and wanting to know about their zodiac. Socializing is important in a person’s life. Because, if a person is in trouble and they can’t find a way out, they can ask help from other people. 

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