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That government should not give help subsidy to people who choose unhealthy lifestyle

Many people these days prefer to live in an unhealthy lifestyle than living in a healthy lifestyle. In America, 6 out of 10 people prefer more to unhealthy lifestyle (healthday.usnews.com). Some people also think that unhealthy lifestyle is better and some people also forget about the risks of choosing unhealthy lifestyle. If you happen to choose unhealthy lifestyle, the benefits are that you can eat delicious junk food, drink much alcohol, or maybe consuming drugs. But there are also costs that are getting obesity or diabetes, have some liver problems, and being a hopeless drug addict that will lead to a divorce in marriage or being arrested. Even though unhealthy lifestyle could be better, but the costs are really bad.

  You can tell whether someone’s living in an unhealthy lifestyle or not by their habits. If someone’s an alcoholic, drug addict, eats junk food a lot, never exercises, and never clean their bodies including taking a bath, you can say that he’s living in an unhealthy lifestyle (mensfitness.com). Unhealthy lifestyles doesn’t only give costs to yourself. People might also get bad effects from your unhealthy lifestyle (betterhealth.vic.gov.au). But actually, the costs that they get or other people gets is actually their own fault. If they got a disease or problems, why should the government care about them? It is still their fault choosing unhealthy lifestyle, even though they have rights to choose.

 As I have mentioned before, about the costs and benefits of unhealthy lifestyle, you can see that the costs are really bad and the benefit isn’t that good. The costs doesn’t always give you disease, remembering the word unhealthy, but also financial problems and problems at school or marriage, because other meanings of unhealthy are not only bad health, but also morally bad, harmful, or contaminating, and also dangerous and risky (dictionary.com) so unhealthy lifestyle can also mean habits that are morally bad, harmful, etc.

Now, also about the costs and benefit, I have also mentioned about what unhealthy means and what problems they can have, which are financial problems, problems at school, marriage, or justice, and also health problems. The costs aren’t really that bad when you only see someone mentioning it. But believe me, you don’t wan’t those things happen to you. So don’t under estimate obesity. This woman, Kenlie Tiggeman, wasn’t allowed to fly by the Southwest gate agent in New Orleans because she was ‘too fat to fly’ (odee.com).

  Financial problems can also happen because of choosing unhealthy lifestyle for living. Smoking is one of unhealthy lifestyle that can cause financial problems. The price of cigarettes now in Indonesia is around RP 12.000 each box or around 1 US Dollar. For some people, 1 box each day isn’t enough. The average number of cigarettes smokers in the Great Britain spend each day is 45 (ash.org.uk). each box of cigarettes contains of 12 pieces of cigarettes. So 45 cigarettes a day is 4 boxes of cigarettes or 4 dollar each day. Don’t forget the matches and ashtray. 4 dollar each day means 120 dollars a month or RP 1.560.000. that’s a lot of money.

  That’s only the bad effects for yourself. Remember, other people can also get the bad effect. 30% of the population in America is an alcoholic (newsweek.com). And you know that too much alcohol can meke you drunk. When you’re drunk you don’t know what you’re doing. So, it’s possible that you might kill someone while you’re drunk, like what happens with Ethan Couch who killed 4 people while he’s drunk (The Washington Post).

  So in conclusion, the reason why government should not give help subsidy to people who chooses unhealthy lifestyle is because if they have problems because of unhealthy lifestyle, it’s their own fault and there’s no reason why the government should care about them. Besides, government have a lot bigger problems to think of.







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