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We Would Ban Animal Testing

What’s in your mind when hearing the word animal? They are wild, friendly, cute, and unique. Pets, wild animals, and farm animals, there are various kinds of animal.  Based on www.dosomething.org , over 100 million animals are killed because burned, crippled, poisoned, and abused each year in U.S., due to animal testing – including medical research, psychological researches, and cosmetic testing.   Many different species are used around the world, but the most common include mice, fish, rats, rabbits, guinea pigs, hamsters, farm animals, birds, cats, dogs, and non-human primates.  Many companies, including some popular brands, have been doing animal testing.  I believe that animal testing should be banned, because it isn’t effective, against animals’ rights, and it gives effect for humankind negatively. 
The foremost reason is that using animals as a test subject for medical researches, cosmetic researches, and psychological tests isn’t effective.  According to www.peta2.com, less than 2% of human illnesses are ever seen in animals, but over 98% never affect animals.   92% of drugs passed by animal tests immediately fail when first tried on humans because they’re useless, dangerous or both.  Based on another website, www.peta.org , Dr. Christopher P. Austin said that, “Traditional animal testing is expensive, time-consuming, uses lots of animals, and from scientific perspective, the results do not necessarily translate to humans”.  This shows that animal testing is not effective to test drugs and medicine.  Animal testing in cosmetic researches and psychological tests might have shown the same results.  Cause basically, although animals are living things and have feelings, they are still different from human.    
Since over 100 million animals are killed each year (in the U.S.), animals’ population is definitely decreasing.  Even though animals can be reproduced, but some types took a long time to do that.  This can affect the environmental balance, food chain, and in the end it will give effect to humans as well.  How? Animal testing uses some kinds of animals we eat, such as chickens, birds, fishes, and farm animals.  If their population is decreasing due to animal testing, in the end, animals will not exist. People will have to be a vegetarian.  Imagine if you are buying a burger filled with veggies.  Few people will eat it, because 32% of the average human’s diet comes from meat. In this way, human can starve.  Plus, animal testing also uses pets: rabbits, hamsters, cats, and dogs. Most people have pets.  They play with their pet, use it as companion, and sometimes, animals like dogs, guides blind people to do their everyday activities.  So, if pets are used for animal testing, people will not have companion and friend to play with. Therefore, it will affect peoples’ psychology and people with disabilities will not be able to live normally.
The last reason is that animal testing is against the most basic right as a living thing like us.  But, do animals deserve rights? I believe they do.  Because if human as a living thing can have rights, why can’t animals and plants have them? According to www.therightsoflivingthings.earth , all living things has the right to be recognized as a living entity, the right to peaceful coexistence, the right of self-protection, the right to freedom, and the right to be valued.  Animal testing burns, cripples, poison, and abuse animals.  This isn’t giving animals the right to have peace, the right to freedom and the right to be valued.

In conclusion, animal testing isn’t effective to test drugs, cosmetics and human psychology. Other than that, it can decrease animal’s population and affect humans in negative ways. Last but not least, it is against living things’ rights.  Therefore, I stand for banning animal testing.  

Government Shouldn’t Give Subsidy for People with Unhealthy Lifestyle

          Lifestyle is the way people live.  It can be a healthy one or an unhealthy one.  Unhealthy lifestyle will build a habit in people, which can slowly disadvantage them.  In America, based on www.helpstartshere.org , the rates of obesity, heart disease, diabetes, kidney disease, and cancer will continue to rise due to unhealthy lifestyle, such as obesity, smoking and physical inactivity.  Obesity in among Americans itself has risen significantly in the past 20 years.  Meanwhile, more than 22% of American adults smoke cigarettes.  Other than that, more than 60% of American adults don’t get enough physical activity to obtain health benefits.  This also happen in some other countries beside America.  Because some people choose unhealthy lifestyle, they often get ill and need government’s subsidy, when they are unable to pay the hospital costs.    
          Government’s subsidies can come through all aspects – transportation, economy and health.  Some countries, based on www.encyclopedia.com , give subsidies to provide defense or other facilities for emergency use; to stimulate domestic economy; to improve balance of international payment; to improve welfare of specific groups.  Those are the main purposes government gives subsidies to their people. 
          I disagree with the statement and I believe that government should give subsidy to people with unhealthy lifestyle. 
          The first reason is related to the main goals of government’s subsidy, ‘To improve welfare of specific groups’.  Based on www.oxforddictionaries.com , welfare means the health, happiness, fortune, and well-being of a group.  This proves that welfare is different from prosperity.  If government doesn’t give subsidy to people, who are ill due to unhealthy lifestyle, it shows that government doesn’t help people to stay healthy.  Healthiness can affect happiness and well-being too.  Now, if government can’t maintain peoples’ happiness, health and well-being, it means that they’re not improving welfare of specific groups.  So, not giving subsidy to people with unhealthy lifestyle is against government’s main purpose of providing subsidy.
       The next reason is that government needs to show that they care for the people to get peoples’ trust by giving subsidy for people who need it. Trust is very important.  First, government needs peoples’ trust so that they can get full support from the people and run their programs and duty easily.  Second, trust is needed to maintain the bond between government and people so that a country is united. 
          However, some may agree with the statement, because the money for subsidy can be used for other needs.  Besides, those people chose unhealthy lifestyle and they should’ve known that it can disadvantage them – it’s not beyond their control and it’s their responsibility.  To solve this problem, in my opinion, government still should give subsidy to people with unhealthy lifestyle, but only once.   So, if they (the people) continue to live in an unhealthy lifestyle and get ill again, they won’t receive any subsidy.  This way, people with unhealthy lifestyle can learn to live in a healthy lifestyle and in the same time government will lose not that much money compared to giving subsidy more than once.  Also, to avoid more people applying unhealthy lifestyle, education of a healthy lifestyle must be given to people. 
          In conclusion, government should give subsidy to people with unhealthy lifestyle, because not giving subsidy to people with unhealthy lifestyle is against government’s main purpose of providing subsidy and government needs to show that they care for the people to obtain peoples’ trust. But, the subsidy must be given no more than once to avoid more lost to a country and also to make people learn to live healthy. 



Should Globalization be Reduce to Decrease the Spread of Disease?

          First of all, based on www.oxforddictionaries.com , globalization is ‘the process by which business or organization develop international influence or start operating on an international scale’.  This means, globalization is worldwide, or specifically, across countries.  In this statement, disease means more to physical illness, rather than psychological illness.  I believe not all kinds of globalization have a direct influence on the spread of a disease.  Globalization in terms of transportation affects the spread of disease directly. 
          Nowadays, transportation has evolved from bicycle and ships to cars and airplanes.  This has given an effect to people.  For example, more people visit other countries today, because it is easier and faster to travel around the world; countries develop more on technology and knowledge, because they can communicate and visit other countries easier; export and import can happen between countries due to the easiness of transporting products abroad.  In terms of health, globalization can make the flows and trades of medicines between countries faster.  This can of course, decrease the number of illness in a country.  In the other side, this can also give negative effects as well. 
          As a proof that transportation can spread the disease quickly, according to www.who.int , in the 14th centuries, there was a disaster called the ‘Black Death’ following shipping routes.  The Black Death itself is a bubonic plague caused by black rats’ fleas.  The fleas live in rats, which inhabited the docks of seaports.  Then they were carried by the ships to a new place.  There, the fleas bit humans and killed approximately 50 million people worldwide.  If disease like this happens today, globalization of transportation can make the spread of disease even faster!
          Since globalization has lots of positive effects, in my opinion, it is not worth it to reduce globalization just to decrease the spread of disease.  Cause if we do that, it will make more negative effects than positive ones.  Although in health perspective, the spread of disease should be reduced. Why? First, once it is spread, it keeps continuing.  For example a person is infected with an infectious disease.  He went to another country for better treatment and he’s ill there.  The disease spreads.  This can happen round and round with a different person. 
          Second, I believe that healthiness affects the growth of a country.  Healthiness can increase productivity and happiness.  I think, happiness is the most important thing in our life.  Some may think money is more important.  But, if people aren’t healthy, how can people work and produce money effectively?  Others might think knowledge is important.  Without health, people will be too tired to study and search for knowledge.  Perhaps, happiness is the most important.  But, a sick people couldn’t feel happy.  Now, if almost all people in a country are healthy, they can produce money and boost the economic growth.  Others can learn and make more advance technology and knowledge.  And the rest can at least feel happy and be creative. 
          So, to not reduce globalization and still minimize the spread of diseases, every country must have a national health security system.  This means that a country have to protect people inside the country from infectious disease.  At the same time, also protect people from disease coming from outside the country.  A country can do this, by checking the health on every visitor and tourist, who visit the country. 

          In conclusion, globalization in terms of transportation can make the spread of disease easier and faster.  However, it has lots more positive effects than negative ones, like the disease.  This shows that it is not worth it to reduce globalization just to decrease a disease.  So, I stand for not reducing globalization to decrease the spread of disease, as long as a country has a national health security system.  

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