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That We Need To Support Death Penalty

Hey guys! Today I would like to discuss about the motion, “That We Need to Support Death penalty.” But first of all, What is death? Death is the act of dying or end of life. (http://www.dictionary.com/). What is Penalty? Penalty is a punishment who did something wrong that were prohibited in law. But what is Death penalty? Death penalty in other way can also called “Capital Punishment” wich is, a punishment that given by the government for someone that did something prohibited in law. Examples like you killed someone, than you also going to be killed. But I know you will not do that. And not only they will go to the prison, but they also going to be killed like what I said before.

        There are many types of Death Penalty. And also each country have the different types of death penalty. The first way is called “Slow Slicing” (China).( http://thoughtcatalog.com/charlie-morrigan/2013/07/10-horrifying-methods-of-capital-punishment-from-around-the-world/).  They used knife to kill that suspect without taking to much time. But it was only from AD 900 until it was banned in 1905.  The next one is, they put the suspect in a special room, and then they throw some toxic gases, and if the suspect inhale, that suspect will died. There are so much more examples, but I’m going to tell you only 2 because it was so sadistic. But bassed on movie that I have seen, in Korea they killed the suspect by using guns.
        There are some countries that erase the death penalty, and there also some countries that still have the death penalty. The countries that erase the death penalty such as: Australia, Canada, France, Germany, Netherlands, Phuliphines, Switzerland, and United Kingdom. Some countries that still have death penalty such as: China, Indonesia, India, Malaysia, Irak, Singapore, Japan, Taiwan, Thailand, United Saudi Arabia,etc.
         Actually, there is no reasons for killing people. Eventhough you don’t like a person, you should not kill them. Well, you can talk to them and make the problem solved. But it’s the different things if the problem is they kill one of your family. If so, you can put them to prison, and ask the police or the Government to give them a Capital punishment.
        Not all crimes have victims. Some examples for no victims crime are: Consume drugs, Cars speeding, Prostitution, Illegal gambling,etc. But still, crimes and other bad things are not allowed, especially at society.
        So inconclusion, I think that this motion should stand because, Doing things that is prohibited in law are bad, that’s why I think that the suspect need to get the punishment that they should get wich is “DEATH PENALTY”.


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That government should not give subsidy to people choose unhealthy lifestyle

       What is government? Government is the political direction and control exercised over the actions of the members, citizens. What is Subsidy? Subsidy is a direct pecuniary aid furnished by a government to a private industrial undertaking, a charity organization, or the like. What is an Unhealthy Lifestyle? Is  not in a state of good or normal health; in an unsound, weak. (http://www.dictionary.com/browse).

      The reason I agree with this motion is, Why government should subsidy them? If The person choose unhealthy lifestyle, and he or she got cancer or go to hospital beacause of their unhealthy lifestyle it is not Goverment’s fault, but it was their fault so they have to pay the hospital by themselves, not  Goverment’s problem.
     
      There are some illness if we choose unhealthy lifestyle. Examples like: Cancer, Diabetes, Heart, Stroke, and many more. (http://www.regenerate-wellness.com/unhealthylifestyle.html) . Once your BMI reaches 30 or above, you are considered obese, and more than 35 percent of adults in America fall into this category, according to the CDC. Obesity increases your risk of developing a host of health problems including heart disease, Type 2 diabetes, certain cancers, high blood pressure, high cholesterol, stroke, sleep apnea, diseases of the liver and gallbladder, osteoarthritis and gynecological problems including infertility (http://www.livestrong.com/article/200742-what-are-the-effects-of-an-unhealthy-diet/).
         Alcohol can be fine in moderation, but when you go to party and you don’t relized that you drink too much, and it is ofcourse a bad habbits. And also unhealthy lifestyle. (http://www.regenerate-wellness.com/unhealthylifestyle.html). Based on my searching at (http://www.itv.com/news/central/2016-03-07/unhealthy-lifestyle-responsible-for-40-of-deaths-in-country/) Eating too much unhealthy foods and drinking more than the recommended are responsible for around 40% of all deaths in England. According to Public Health England it is also costing the NHS more than £11 billion a year. 65% of men aged 16 plus were overweight or obese, 64% of women aged 16 plus were overweight or obese, and the last 45,600 hospital admissions in 2013/14 had obesity as a contributing factor.



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            So, in conclusion I think that this motion should stand because, if people choosing unhealthy lifestyle and they get sick it’s their false not the government’s false, so government’s should not give the subsidy.

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