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Persuasive text by Naila Sabrina


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That homework should be banned

Many children say homework is hard or boring right? First I'm gonna  define the motion.  So what is home work?schoolwork assigned that should be done out side the classromm(www.dictionary.com) .

I agree with this motion because homework is making kid tired.  Kid already got full day at school and they go home with homework. Of course the kid don’t want to do the homework because they are to tired to do the homework they just want to go to  sleep because they already fullday school. My first point is if their  teacher give them homework and they can do the homework incorrectly. Because it’s homework they do in home and someone in  home can help them because the she/he fill it so hard and her ask for help and he or she don’t do it but someone he ask do it and if the  kid do like that again and its can be bad habit and bad habit is hard  to change those bad habits.

My second point is children need more playing in outside. So  when you go home and when you go home you must to do home work and if they done its time to go sleep so the kid dont have playing because of the homework that they must to done and if they want to play they must to do the home work first and when she do the home work quickly and the home work all wrong because they need to play not do the home work .

My 3 point it can be hard to the parent to.it can be the nightmare for the parent when they teach the kid when in complex part. not only the kid fill it but the parent fill the stress.
My 4 point home work is stressful. Home work is very stressful like i was say in my 3 poin . stress is not good for young age. Stress is unhealthy and leads to a lot of health issues. There is simply not 
enough time in a day for a full day of school and a full night of homework.(assignmentsdone.com)

So in conclusion this motion should stand because its make we stress,make our parent stress to, kid need more playing.


That government should not give help subsidy for people who choose unhealthy lifestyle 

What is government? Government is the govering body of nation. What is subsidy? subsidy is a sum of money granted by the government to assist an industry so that price of a commodity may remain low.
I agree that government should not give help subsidy for people  who choose unhealthy lifestyle. First, smoking. If we smoke and the smoke is going anywhere and make the air dirty and is very hard to decrease the smoker because smoking is already their habit. If the smoker smoking to much they gonna have cancer  of course government don’t give subsidy to the smoker because the smoker already make the air dirty and they got cancer and the government should give them subsidy. So, if the government give help for people who choose unhealthy life style and people want to be unhealthy because if they sick the government give them subsidy, people who choose unhealthy life style will increase.
The government should not pay for them who choose unhealthy life style because the government don’t do that and why the government should pay if they don’t do that. That will be unfair. So this motion should stand because unhealthy people already make our planet  planet dirty and the government should not pay for them who got sick because of their unhealthy lifestyle because the government don’t do that.
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