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That use of animals for drug testing is justified
Rebuttal
The 2nd speaker of the positive team said “if we tested the drug to the animal first, we wouldn’t get sick.” But, if we do that to some animal, the other animal will be rare. What’s the future for the other animal?
Arguments
No, we cannot use animals for drug testing. Animals will be sick if we tested the drug to the animals. Drug is a medicine that is forbidden. Based on freeinternational.org “95 percent of animal that tested by drugs failed.” Of course, drug testing for animal can be failed. There are a lot of impacts that happens on future.  My first speaker had already told you that drugs testing can make the animal stress. The examples of future impacts: Some animal will be rare and some animal will be stress.
Future impacts
1.  Some animal will be rare
We shouldn’t use animal for drug testing or animal will be rare. If we always use animal for drug testing, what is the future for the animal? And the answer is “there is no future!”
2.  Some animal will be stress
Stress is not good for animals. If the animal is stress, the animal will do something wrong or make something worst. People will be sad too, why? Because the animal do something wrong to the people things.

conclusion,
We shouldn’t do bad things like use animals for drug testing. There are a lot of bad future impacts that will happen to the animal. The example of future impacts is that the animals will be stress.
So,You see a big reason why this statement should fall.

That homework is wasting the time

We always get many homework from many people. People like to give us homework because they want us to be discipline. The example is our teacher. Teacher will never forget to give homework for us. If we want a better future, we must be discipline. Discipline is the key of success. I know if homework will make us bored, but we will get a lot of knowledge from it. How? Some homework talks about social, civic, science and other.
We will get a lot of benefits from doing our homework. The benefits are: first, homework teaches student how to solve a problem. For students, solving a problem is so hard. But, actually solving problem is not as hard as what students think. Students can solve the problem by doing their homeworks. Example: she hates to do her homework. When she’s in school she got a problem. What will she do? The answer is “nothing”
Second, homework teaches student how to be responsible. Yes, homework will teach students how to be responsible. Some students are responsible but some are not. Responsible will bring us to a better future. Based on http://www.goodcharacter.com people will not believe you if you are not responsible with your homework. Example: our teacher want us to keep something and we are not responsible with something that our teacher want. Of course the teacher wouldn’t want to believe us.
Third, homework gives parents a chance to see what their child is learning in school. Parents will know about our assessment. Parents will know what we learn in school. Parents will know it from our homework. How? When we do our homework, parents usually see what homework are we doing. Parents will be proud to us. Example: you get an assessment at school and you got remidial. Of course your Mom and Dad know it. if you told your mom if you got remidial I’m sure that they wouldn’t angry to you.
Forth, homework teaches students how to set priorities. Yes, it’s correct. Student needs priority for their daily life. What is priority? Based on http://www.oxforddictionaries.com The fact or condition of being regarded or treated as more important than others. Based on http://www.priceless-teaching-strategies.com Students must think and look closely before setting priorities. And other.
 I believe that this motion ‘That homework is wasting the time’ is wrong. So, the conclusion is that teacher should give homework for students. Students will get a lot of benefits from homework. Students will know a lot of knowledge from homework. Examples of homework: civic homework, science homework, social homework and other homework. What are the benefits if we do a lot of homework? First, it’s easier to solve the problems. Second, it teaches student how to be responsible. Third, parents will know what the children learns in school. Forth, it teaches students how to set priorities. So, I believe that this statement should fall.



Government should not give help subsidy for people who choose unhealthy lifestyle

What is lifestyle? Lifestyle is someone’s way of living or particular group of people usually do. There are 2 lifestyles which is healthy lifestyle and unhealthy lifestyle. Unhealthy lifestyle is a habit of person that is not good and unhealthy. We know that an individual makes some choice freely, but some choices are heavily influenced by external factors. Many factors cause unhealthy lifestyle.
Firstly, smoking cigarette. Why smoking cigarette is bad for you? Smoking cigarette is responsible for several disease such as cancer, long term (chronic) respiratory disease, mouth cancer and heart disease, as well as premature death. Why smoking cigarette can make us get cancer? There are approximately 600 ingredients in cigarettes. When burned, they create more than 7,000 chemicals. At least 69 of these chemicals are known to cause cancer, and many are poisonous.
Second, alcohol. Alcohol can make us sick. Alcohol usually uses fermentation. Fermentation is the process which yeast breaks down sugar into alcohol and carbon dioxide. Alcohol takes a serious toll on your health. Alcohol interferes with the brain’s communication pathways, and can affect the way the brain looks and works. These disruptions can change mood and behavior, and make it harder to think clearly and move with coordination. Drinking a lot over a long time or too much on a single occasion can damage the heart. And other.
Yes, government should not give help subsidy for people who choose unhealthy lifestyle. If the government give subsidy to the people who choose unhealthy lifestyle the government will loss. The  conclusion is that government should not give subsidy to the people who choose unhealthy lifestyle for them not to buy something that is not good for their lives. The examples: firstly, they will buy cigarette. Smoking cigarette can make us get cancer.  Secondly, they will buy alcohol. Alcohol takes a serious toll in our body. So, the government should not give subsidy for the people who choose unhealthy lifestyle for a better future.





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